Reviews for That Night by susie

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Jessie (Chapter 14) - Fri 17 Mar 2023

Ok omg absolutely loved it 


Monomyth (Chapter 14) - Tue 03 Aug 2021

What a story! I devoured this in a few hours.

I love that you made Sesshomaru familiar, but also different enough in ways that allowed you to develop his character in ways you saw fit. Seeing everyone's favourite haughty, stoic daiyokai lord have to plead with Kagome and work towards earning her trust and affection showed the richness of your imagination and the strength of your writing. He had to learn to be vulnerable, to express rather than repress, to humble himself and to serve others in ways that did not always jive with his status. It was definitely a fun and touching exploration of the other facets of his personality. You balanced the familiar with the unfamiliar, and it was very fresh and interesting to read. And... it also broke my fucking heart a lot. Thank god for the humour you sprinkle throughout all the angst!

Oof, and the way Sesshomaru and Kagome were going at each other on the forest floor? All night long (all night)? <fans self> Sub!Sess is my jam and I was thrilled—delighted, really—that you had Kagome taking charge. It was so good the way you showed that it'd been a long time for him and he wasn't quite in control of his body as always, and seeing that control slip was Hot. Seeing him refuse to admit defeat and try to rise (haha) to the occasion again and again was possibly even Hotter. The back-and-forth (verbal, not physical... though that too, holy hell) between them sparked with chemistry and it's no wonder the poor boy was besotted after that.

It was definitely not easy to read about the love triangle going on with Kagome, Inuyasha, and Sess. I think you portrayed her inner conflict in a sympathetic and persuasive manner. Love and obligation don't get extinguished in an instant. As someone who much prefers SessKag over InuKag, I of course favour Kagome being with Sess, but you definitely captured her sense of duty and commitment to Inuyasha. It was never meant to be an easy decision and even though there were times I felt frustrated with Kagome's indecision and how long it took for her to be honest (to herself and to Sess!) about her feelings, I can understand that she was having a hard time. It was a messy and complicated situation and I appreciate that you wrote about it with kindness and empathy. By the end of it all, I even felt sorry for Inuyasha and his part in the circumstances... but I think Kagome definitely made the right choice. And I am glad she made a choice. Also, what a way to finish! For SessKag and the reader!

Thank you for your good work! May the muses always smile upon you.

 


a (Chapter 3) - Sat 07 Nov 2020

Now im all for kagome and sesshomaru but bring your lover/ baby daddy into your home while your husband is away is cruel... in this story inuyasha is likable snd Kagome is... not. Girl just leave your husband rather than continuously cheating on him. I mean at this point Kagome is being cruel.


Sora-chan (Chapter 14) - Sun 27 Sep 2020

Ah I love this story so. I had wondered if InuYasha went to the future, it really was the only thing that made sense. 

I'm just so happy with the last few chapters and this ending. The angst was killing me, all the near moments but it was ssoooooo good! 

Ugh you're such a great writer. Thank you for blessing us


IndiaNovember (Chapter 14) - Thu 16 Jul 2020

Amazing. You. And this story. <3


Seluna Maru (Chapter 14) - Sat 04 Jul 2020

Honestly loved this story!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 11) - Fri 03 Jul 2020

I realize I have read this before, but damn this droned on. It kinda ruined the smut


Seluna Maru (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Jul 2020

Oooo this one is too realistic huh! Lol I mean if u really think about it this is exactly how it might have gone down. But damn people gonna say their Sess sama's mate sleep with his bro. Ooooo child


Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Tue 30 Jun 2020

Lmao Kaede nosy AF


Seluna Maru (Chapter 3) - Sun 28 Jun 2020

What?! But if Hanyos sterile how will Kagome kids have kids?  Le gasp


Seluna Maru (Chapter 2) - Sun 28 Jun 2020

Oh my oh my. This was good!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 2) - Sun 28 Jun 2020

No a prequel after starting the story is perfect. Movies do it all the time. It makes you want to know more! 


Koree (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 May 2020

D: this is the second story ( that's my fav ) that has ended this week !! I'm saddddddd but I throughly enjoyed reading your story it was amazing & took me on a emotional rollercoaster lol 


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 May 2020

LOVED IT!!!~well worth reading.

c'ya'


SHORTFRY (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 May 2020

Oo, totally know what you mean by researching feudal era items! Sometimes it just takes too much time to research, it's fiction anyway! Great job on this! I'm loving the tender caring side to Sesshomaru in this fic, and all the smutty goodness.  Gonna binge the next chapters :)


Buttercream (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

Awesome!!!!!  What a wonderful ending.   Kagome and Sesshomaru are happy and so are Inuyasha and his mate.


CCR666 (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

This was great! Thank you for a really good ending. I like Only Human A LOT also, so I'm psyched that you'll be adding to it! My account is very new, but I've been "lurking" for quite awhile. I really enjoy your writing. Thank you again! ????


Mecca (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

Who loves YOU?? We do!! Oh thank you so much for giving us such an awesome ending! It feels complete and so satisfying! I truly did not expect Inuyasha to have gone to the future, what a fuckin twist! Thank goodness for awesome writing and great and happy endings. You could always do one shots based off this universe, like from future Kags and Sesshou's POV or something. Also, thank you so much for adding that last bit! I was wondering how it actually happened. It would make sense that Sesshou had to be pushed past that sense of honor of his or strongly coerced somehow. Another gem of a story! Thank you for this <3


Purple Rain (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Standing ovation for this masterful fiction. Job well done and I love that it fels complete in a way that is totally organic. Thank you again or sharing this story with us. I look forward to reading more of your works soon. Please keep up the excellent work. 

~PR~

4got to sign it ????

I'm also glad there was closure all around and that it wasn't a poly fic. Kudos


Purple Rain (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Standing ovation for this masterful fiction. Job well done and I love that it fels complete in a way that is totally organic. Thank you again or sharing this story with us. I look forward to reading more of your works soon. Please keep up the excellent work. 


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