Wow intense chapter. I'm a little confused about Sess but I think you will explain further in the story.
New reader here! I love how your writing / storytelling style is a lot different than my other fave authors here! You really give this fic that dark, mysterious, sinister vibe!
And I love Kagome's character here. I somehow feel like we're the same. Haha Giarding our feelings because we're afraid.
Looking forward for the next chapter! ????
So far I’m very much enjoying this story, and I love how you give the family a creepy “Great Expectations” feel, but I’m waiting for something big to happen. I feel like you have a great set up, but the strory itself is puttering kind of slowly. I can’t wait to see what happens!
Orotami (Chapter 11) - Mon 25 Nov 2019
Whats with the fax?! Is Kagome suicidal? What a fierce cliff hanger!
Shanika (Chapter 11) - Mon 25 Nov 2019
Help me please.... I'm confused is Sessohomaru and his family Demon? Do Kagome knows or do she suspects that he is one? I hope that we can get a couple more chapters before Thanksgiving
Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Thu 21 Nov 2019
I don't like jiisan here....i like the "be gone demon!!" jiisan. But, it's a new character of jiisan. Yes i think its really dark fic. Because the roasting scene. I thougt it was the meat...but it's a human body. And the poor youkai that they hunted here. I still don't know. Whether the higurasi are the bad guy or the yokai...because the story didn't reveal why they hunted youkai. I know that kagome's father do it for sport...but i didn't know if they hunt the bad yokai or every yokai the meet, doesn't care if they bad or good. But i hope if the higurasi are the bad one....sesshomaru will forgave kagome. So far sesshomaru really sweet and care to kagome. Please make it the good sesshomaru here...sometimes i need bad higurasi too. Not always sesshomaru or his family. Need the fluffy stuf for the couple please....
Orotami (Chapter 10) - Wed 20 Nov 2019
How I love this story! I truly can't wait for more. This is such a master piece already!
Lauren (Chapter 10) - Wed 20 Nov 2019
That was... Interesting. They really need to get their shit together. But is Kagome turning into something? Or is she remembering one thing, and having a nightmare at once?
I'm so curious to see where this goes.
Why do I feel like she's digging herself in deeper? Also, love Nagasada. He seems genuine.
More please!!!! :)
Krisan (Chapter 9) - Sun 10 Nov 2019
Oh God oh God, what’s gonna happen next? That’s was one cliffhanger
Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Thu 07 Nov 2019
If sesshomaru here a good mad or good demon. I hope kagome will accept him and love him no matter what he is. I feel sorry for sesshomaru too. He like disapointed at kagome. I hope they love each other. Next please!!!
What an interesting chapter. I would imagine that she's definitely starting to have regrets about her situation. The addition of Miroku is well timed and I love the twist on his career. Very cool. Something about this whole story feels a bit Mommy Dearest, but creepy calm.
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