Jesus that's dark. Consequently,, when was Kagome in the hospital? I know there were two things I didn't quite understand and that was one if them. Can't remember the first.
Carlyn (Chapter 12) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Not gonna lie...I don't get it. Lol But I'm sure I will soon. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 11) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Oh sh******t!
Carlyn (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Ok. SO MUCH happened in this chapter. So I'm just going to go with the main 2. Beginning and end. First off, "There are moments that define a person." is a phenomenal beginning to this chapter!!! PARTICULARLY given the last sentence of the previous chapter, even though they didn't really intersect. I was totally enthralled! Second, the END of this chapter! I know it's necessary, but I really do hate it when those two fight. But I also love that it's not really resolved yet. They just can't stand fighting. Lol Ok and 1 more thing... Jii Chan? OMG so happy to know he's not actually a friggin psychopath. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
"Sometimes we answer the call of madness." Haha! Nail on the head! Let's see what madness transpires with those beads! Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Jeeeeeeeezus! Wtf is gong on here? Lol! Sesshomaru is keeping some serious secrets! I wonder if he knows about Kagomes abilities? He has to, right?
Carlyn (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
You have to love Sesshomarus mother. I've never met a role of hers I didn't love, friend or foe. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 6) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
OMG I'm obsessed with this story! It's so incredibly interesting. There's such a feeling of mystery here in doing to find out what it is. I could do with some further detail in their Lemon encounters as so far they're crazy short given the rating. But otherwise you're killing it!
Carlyn (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Good God this is getting interesting! Lol Also (SPOILER!!!), so they didn't have sex in their wedding night? Did I read that right?
Andressa (Chapter 20) - Fri 09 Oct 2020
This is one of the best fics I've seen in a while. You have a great plot here and mad writing skills. Please don't give up! :))
Belen (Chapter 20) - Mon 07 Sep 2020
Hey! This is the best fanfic i have ever read. I don't know if you have plans to continue i surely hope you do. It's hard to let go such a incredible story. Just want it let you know that. Thanks a lot for this little piece of your imagination.
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