Great last line. I love how their relationship is changing to something that should have been. I think they are both making up for the lost time.
You know, I'm kind of I insulted for kagome. She does something a little bit selfish, that really hurts no one, and its not even the thing they all think she is doing; and they pretty much think of her as a no good, unforgivable, hussy who is ruining their lives. Like, W.T.F.
She has sacrificed her life for them, any real chance at a future that wouldnt put her into staggering debt, he family and ability to relate to modern problems, and they have a the audacity the treat her like that?! I kind of hope that they really choke on their words and Kagome puts them at least a little bit an arm length. That seems only fair
2 anyways so far Loving Story get me super hyped up, can't wait to read more.
Best regards, tio
I am still loving this
It is a good chapter. I'm glad Inuyasha can find peace and joy in his brother. Oh please, please let kagome make it back in time. Please!
Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Oct 2019
Fun story! I'm enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work!
Barredwindows (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Oct 2019
100 points to Sesshomaru for being a mature adult. I see why shippo and inuyasha are being so hard on kagome but really what she does is her own choice. She made no promises to Sesshomaru and I'm glad he realises that as well. Looking forward to Sesshomaru and kagome talking this out.
Ceysna (Chapter 18) - Sun 06 Oct 2019
O.O wow..... just wow!
The more I think on it, the more I feel bad for Inuyasha . He has such little faith in himself. He worries the only reason he was invited to the west was because of kagome, and not because of himself .Such little faith in himself and in his alpha (sessh). I feel badly for him.
Ah, the stuff I think of while helping a little child bathe... ????
Ugh, kags has to make it! Even if Inuyasha was acting like a jewel, she has to make it back! Please!!
*on the of my seat* I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update.
Ceysna (Chapter 17) - Sun 06 Oct 2019
uh-oh. Putting off the inevitable is never good Kags.
I'm dying to know if there is a future Sesshoumaru. I love how her Mom is portrayed. Thanks for the update.
Ceysna (Chapter 16) - Sat 05 Oct 2019
ooooo, Sessh can't take criticism? Omg, he's gonna scent a horny miko on Kouga, isn't he?
Woah Inuyasha, way to jump to conclusions. And I imagine things are about to get extra stressful with the summit, human marriage ceremomy at the fortress, and Inuyasha's giant mouth causing problems. Poor Sess and Kags!
I'm eager to see what the pack thinks of Inuyasha calling her a slut. I think he forgot that it was the slut that gave his mate life...
PrincessFrost (Chapter 16) - Sat 05 Oct 2019
You're story is fun to read and unpredictable - I like it! Great work, can't wait to find out what happens next.
(>^_^<)
Barredwindows (Chapter 15) - Sat 05 Oct 2019
There's no reason we should be mad at you. We should be mad at inuyasha. I understand things are finally going well with your only remaining family member but this is Kagome's life. Sesshomaru and kagome made no promises to each other and kagome has no way of knowing what Sesshomaru wants from her. I do believe that instead of just assuming kagome should have at least spoken to Sesshomaru about seeing other people but what she does with her own life is her choice. Anyway i definitely did not expect anything that happened in this chapter to happen. Especially koga and kagome's relationship. I look forward to your future chapters!
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