Reviews for Never Let Me Down by susie

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zenfluence (Chapter 27) - Sun 20 Oct 2019

I like where this is going. Normally this type of fic follows the fluffy ending trope without Kagome experiencing any vices lol. I mean, fluff appears to be the ending but the ride to it appears to be very bumpy ahead.

 

me likey


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 26) - Sun 20 Oct 2019

Since you asked the 3 sum is vague compared to your other sex scenes but still good


Miss C (Chapter 26) - Sun 20 Oct 2019

Not my favorite chapter, definitely wasn't expecting that. Stupid Kagome.


Night Wraith (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

I also wanted to add that even though I wasn't a fan of this chapter, I am a fan of the story. 


Night Wraith (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

I can't say that I'm a fan of this one. It was too force and I felt it cheapens all the characters. No matter how altruistic it may seem, (and I apologize that this sounds harsh) but Kagome was straight out pimping Sesshomaru as a whore for lands he could have won. Toran was no better in putting her personal feelings above the welfare of her people and is really unworthy as a ruler. Maybe this reflects real life politics. My sympathy lays with Sesshomaru in this.  The simple matter was he was uncomfortable and pressured into it and if something like this were to happen, then all parties should want it.


Sessygurl (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

It was fabulous. I love how Kagome took charge. She will be a force to reckon with. I also thought the drunk Kaede was hilarious.


klee (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Love the fic but this threesome made me feel just as uncomfortable as Sesshomaru! I get why she did it to help spare lives in war but it seems like she ignores his discomfort. But I guess in a sense she is attempting not to weaken him. As he said before he would not have any problem with the threesome, as it was the most tactical way to get what he wanted. But I wandering what the reprocussions will be. If touran tries to renig ide say have kagome beat the brakes off her. Lol!


Buttercream (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

I do not know. A threesome. Sesshomaru did not want this. Kagome of course thinking this will give them land.  Touran on the other hand will want more out of this.  I have a feeling Touran will be up to something to get Sesshomaru all to herself.


zofie (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

i like your story and the concept. But I must say I am truly dissapoited in this latest chapter. I don`t like Kagomes proclamation of love and then just ignore Sesshomarus discomfot and dislike of the threesome idea. Much more i quite desspise the idea and she still manipulated him with emotional bonds and that crap to actually go through with the act. I don`t like your image of Kagomes character. She is behaving like a bitch who doesn`t consider feelings of others. I don`t know in which direction you`re going in this story or what you actually want in the end, but I`ll be very much dissapoited if these sexual acts or any similar acts will apear in future chapters. I really hate open relationships and I want Sesshoamru to have a healty loving monogamus oriented mate.  


Mecca (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Ummmm. Yeah. Threesome MFF + Sesshoumaru = that was pretty, erm, hot *fans self* I really like how compassionate your Sesshoumaru is, and that he was the one essentially that caught feelings before Kagome. Kagome is kind of a slut... but she’s having fun, and being a modern woman in a feudal world with demons isn’t as crazy of a concept, apparently. I’m really hoping Touran will be happy and become friends with them afterward, or if she does pull a fast one in the morning after sex (which I figure is gonna happen), hopefully Kagome will set her straight. Maybe fry or charbroil her a little with holy powers hehe! 


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Truly enjoying your story so far. I honestly couldn’t see the point of this chapter in relation to the story - it seemed really unnecessary. I am hoping your next update will add some clarity.


WW (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Honestly this chapter seemed pretty unnecessary, love the fic tho


Ceysna (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

You nailed it on the head! Very emotionally charged piece, well done. Am worried how Sessh is going to handle this tomorrow. Kag is used to multiple partners, not Sessh. Plus he's possessive asf. Hand grenade indeed.


Curly Elephant (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

That was a very interesting turn of events. I can't wait to see what happens the next morning, to see who might now Harbor feelings for whom. Keep up the good work.


Barredwindows (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Nope nope nope nope nope. This was as uncomfortable for me as it was for Sesshomaru. And I hate how Kagome forced Sesshomaru to accept Touran's mouth on him. Especially when he thought it was something exclusive to Kagome. I just hope this was a one time thing and that they won't be doing this ever again. What I liked about this chapter was how uncomfortable a threesome made me because usually I'm down for it. But this time I just wanted to stop reading. Kudos to you for managing to evoke such emotions in me. But I would love it if you could make Touran go away and focus on Kagome and  Sesshomaru now. Excited about the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be much lighter than this one was


Barredwindows (Chapter 26) - Sat 19 Oct 2019

Nope nope nope nope nope. This was as uncomfortable for me as it was for Sesshomaru. And I hate how Kagome forced Sesshomaru to accept Touran's mouth on him. Especially when he thought it was something exclusive to Kagome. I just hope this was a one time thing and that they won't be doing this ever again. What I liked about this chapter was how uncomfortable a threesome made me because usually I'm down for it. But this time I just wanted to stop reading. Kudos to you for managing to evoke such emotions in me. But I would love it if you could make Touran go away and focus on Kagome and  Sesshomaru now. Excited about the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be much lighter than this one was


Buttercream (Chapter 25) - Thu 17 Oct 2019

Good to see Sesshomaru and Inuyasha growing closer.   I'm feeling sorry for Kai being assigned to watch over Kagome.


Sessygurl (Chapter 25) - Thu 17 Oct 2019

I love your writing. Keep up the good work. Im sure we will love whatever you post next. I for one am excited about the wedding. Thanks for the quick update.


pclark (Chapter 25) - Thu 17 Oct 2019

You are doing a great job writing this story. I really like it.


Ceysna (Chapter 25) - Thu 17 Oct 2019

Don't be nervous. Your work is great!! And if it's an emotional roller coaster, we'll just have to hang on and enjoy the ride. Besides, this is a work of FICTION, doesn't have to be historically accurate, gotta love it!


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