I can see why you cried writing the last drabble chapter. But this, this chapter is pure bliss. Till next time :-)
Wow, she has a terrible decision to make. Surely, she must miss her family on the other side of the well. She is right that no one will understand the magnitude of her loss or its horrific nature. She could lose Sesshomaru if the well wouldn’t let her come back, and that would double her grief, double her loss knowing that she left him to continue alone, without her.
silence (Chapter 27) - Tue 11 Jun 2019
This is so sad! =(
Orotami (Chapter 27) - Tue 11 Jun 2019
I'm bawling my eyes out! Such vivid imagery with this drabble. What a way to end the work day.
Orotami (Chapter 25) - Tue 11 Jun 2019
Thank you so much for dedicating this drabble to me! It fits me perfectly! I can just imagine Sesshoumaru's eyes filled with exhaustion but power at doing something he couldnt do for their friends and loved ones. Such devotion he's showing Kagome and she gets it. From severe loss to something more. Beautiful.
Nilee1 (Chapter 27) - Tue 11 Jun 2019
I have never read Drabble so incredibly insightful and evocative. I am eager for your updates.
silence (Chapter 25) - Tue 11 Jun 2019
I'm actually glad you're continuing as drabbles, TBH, I like it better this way! =)
What a mess for them. To be able to bring something back so easily but the pain of not having that opportunity available when it seems most needed.
The companionship in loss and pain is an amazing thing. Studded with humor, this is a great story.
Nilee1 (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Jun 2019
LOL, poor Sesshomaru exhausted with a vomit covered girl in your lap and vomit on your shoes. My how the pristine have fallen????????????????
Thank you for sharing your beatific work! I say, the more the merrier! :3 If you were to write longer chapters I'm sure many of us wouldn't protest to the idea~ Drabbles are great in it's simplicity, many SessKag are drabbles, but maybe that's why I think it would be better for this story to show more progress and development in one long chapter, your writting style would fit greatly, in my opinion.
(Or maybe I'm just being greedy and want more? x'D ) Nah, I'm honest. But yes (?)
Keep on the hard work! I appreciate it very much in my dull days!
Toni (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Jun 2019
Really love this story
Orotami (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Jun 2019
Man, what a great de stressor from an otherwise crazy work day! So happy to see this update and at the perfect time. I loved the ending of this part. Kagome, nobody blames you. I'd be throwing up too! Till next time :-)
I am very much into this story. It is well written and I am definitely lured in. I detest drabbles, no insult intended to anyone; I MUCH prefer chapter stories. They seem to be much easier to follow the plot and verse,as the drabbles make it too jumbled. Just my opinion. That being said, its no deal breaker for a story this good!!!!
Meg
Orotami (Chapter 15) - Mon 10 Jun 2019
Our weary warriors are feeling the burn. Poor Sesshoumaru. At least he doesnt feel the need to transform yet to protect them. Kagome should fall asleep in 3, 2, 1... at least I know I would! Your drabbles are still beautiful and I cant wait for more!
Lovely story! I have to say I’m hooked. The drabble format actually works really well and flows nicely for this story. It doesn’t feel as if the moments are unfinished/cut short for the sake of keeping the chapters drabble length. You really feel the weight of their exhaustion and sadness in each one and I look forward to seeing how they grow together. Each snippet feels like one more baby step to lead them towards overcoming their hardship and so beautiful to me. The emotions and interactions feel natural and genuine for the two characters. I’m so impressed with this drabble and the story has just started, so I finally just had to leave a review! (I’m usually a looong oneshot or long full chapter SessKag kinda gal) Regardless if you decide to keep your chapters short or full length, great work and I’m excited for more!
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