Somehow, this was such a heartwarming chapter. Can't wait to read more of this story!
marisel (Chapter 9) - Wed 11 Sep 2019
This story is so intense and seems hopeless in that time? Men are pigs. He he he. Love the story ,my curiosity is pique.
Awesome update. Poor Rin. I enjoy reading the interactions between the three of them.
Orotami (Chapter 9) - Wed 11 Sep 2019
LOVE it!! What a chapter! Intense, passionate and thrilling. Can't wait to read more!
I love this story so much. I freak out after a while thinking it might be abandoned, so I'm happy its not! So dark, but there's so much going on. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Lauren (Chapter 9) - Tue 10 Sep 2019
So depressing and terrible! I think she ran and left Rin too.
I hope the next chapter is less solemn.
KayAkuma (Chapter 9) - Tue 10 Sep 2019
Like always, cant wait for the next update! I'm so glad I found your stories, I'm hooked on them now =)
Naraku is one creepy guy. It seems Sesshomaru does not like him either. Please update soon.
i know its suppose to be a dark story, but the way you're writing it makes me want to know more and if it will have a lot of chapters with a somewhat happy ending-to quote a title of a fanfic i read long ago. Lol. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Heavily breathing......ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!
s_spina (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 Aug 2019
Oh shit
Im beyond words with your story
Very well written,it easily pulls you into the storyline
Ingidoo (Chapter 8) - Sat 17 Aug 2019
So hyped for more! I love how there isn't any instant love here. Great development of their relationships. Please, keep up the great work!
who is it?? I'm hooked. I need the background, what happend to souta? what's next? update soon!
Koree (Chapter 8) - Tue 06 Aug 2019
Amazing chap ! Kags powers not hurting Sessh is cool
Toni (Chapter 8) - Sun 04 Aug 2019
so Naruku showed up and hs rin cant wait to see what happens next please update soon
marisel (Chapter 8) - Sat 03 Aug 2019
I would punch innthevmourh, perverted
So happy for an update! I love this story and their growing relationship, whatever it might be. And though he's a creep, always, I love Naraku. So glad to see he's coming into this now. Thank you!
I promptly teleported to this chapter once I saw it was released! Lol. Omg why are you being a tease! Please update more please please plleeeaaasseeeeee! Lol
Orotami (Chapter 8) - Fri 02 Aug 2019
Naraku! That bastard! Man I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh hell no! If they don’t blast his ass and be done with it. I’m sorry but even in an alternate Universe i’m done with Naraku, the spider that never gets squished self.
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