What a beautiful chapter.  I love the descriptions and her interactions with Sesshoumaru,. It reminds me of the Goblin Market and warms my heart.  I cannot wait!  Love this story so much!

Damn Kagome. Just can’t catch a break! I’m really enjoying Sesshomaru’s slightly playful side that’s being displayed as well as Rin’s childlike maturity. 

That's a very different mating ceremony,  poor kagome. I think I would kill myself.   It is too crazy, .  Impressive,  can't wait for the next one,,.

Where is inuyasha? 

Oh my god what a place to leave a cliffhanger!
I've never read of such unique wedding in SessxKagome stories. It was a delight to read!
So looking forward to the next chapter! And dreadfully waiting what lies in store for poor Rin and Naraku! It's already making my skin crawl in a deliciously evil way... :D

Man! I cant wait for more! What a place to leave us at!

Ahhhhh I want more!!

omg omg omg yes! This update. We’re learning more, and about to start this conflicted relationship. Omg! I’m so excited. Sess probably realizes the place he’s in in relation to Kagome - “I’ll love our children, and you’re forcing me” statement last chapter. I’m so excited to see how this goes! And Naraku does not deserve Rin!

Omg... is he... are they... gonna do that... in canine form? >//////<

I really like all of your stories. And you always complete it. I like otome game!!! All of yours!!

this is a promising story so far so keep it coming

So now she will be use as a baby machine.  Death to the yokai scum, I  tell you , show no mercy and she was rape  how is she going to cope with a force mating.  Ummmm

This story! I love the Interaction she had with Sesshomar. Really helped to reveal more of their character and motivations. a part of me wants to see if he become possessive/fatherly towards Rin like in the original storyline.

Also, I have just a quick catch on an error.  This one always sticks out to me and is a pet peeve of mine.  Usually, I can read through and let things slide, but I assume everyone who posts here is trying to develop their skills in writing and storytelling.  So this is just a commonly made mistake, swapping taut for taunt. 

Taunt:

Aaah!  So happy for an update!  Kagome definitely has a lot to deal with.  She seems to be taking it in stride though.  Sesshoumaru, devious Mastermind!

It's getting more exciting! Thanks for the new chapter! Well written as always~

Oh man! I love where you’re going with this fic. Is Sesshoumaru scheming to usurp power from the other lords?! Will Kagome ever escape? I’m glad she’s keeping Rin. I’ve been looking forward to this update the whole time!!

Keep up the awesome work!!!

Oh man I've been waiting for an update from you. I can't wait for more!

I really enjoy this story. I'm in love with the plot so far and its written beautifully! I'm excited for the next chapters!

Oh boy now what she's going to do?  Very difficult to escape that situation.  Been force into a hooking whether you name it ming or Blu flower house.  Not to much hope!  Ne

This is such a different fic than what I read before. I was dreading to read it because I usually only read completed ones. But I also don’t do curiosity well and now I am hooked. I look forward to the future updates! 

What a story. Can't wait for.more!