Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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Gabby (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jun 2021

WELL..... i like it. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 40) - Fri 18 Jun 2021

His answers always leave me with more questions lol. I need clarification!!! I don't remember Kagome loving that girl. I got the feeling that she just wanted her to apprentice with her or something. I really need to go back and reread. Why is she ok loving some girl but not Sesshomaru? How is liking that girl not a betrayal to Inuyasha but being with Sesshomaru is? I reeeeeally still want them together is that bad? Lol I also wanna know if she's really going to die!! That'd be a twisted ending. Appropriate for this story. Please update soon! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 39) - Sun 16 May 2021
And again... Kaneko ruin the day, lol

REDWOLF (Chapter 39) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Very good chapter...Rin, is very spoiled and troubled.  I think she's going to end up telling Sesshoumaru everything.  Look forward to the next update.


Mecca (Chapter 39) - Wed 14 Apr 2021

Oh man. I can't even with this version of Kagome. She's the most selfish, annoying and irritating version I've come across in a long while - and everything seems to be crumbling around her because she's so stubborn. (It's not a bad thing, I love that this story is unpredictable and definitely no Mary Sue Kagome here) Even as she tries to remain "true to herself," and maintain independence of a sort, these males are just pretty much running her over and she's losing control. Kanako is just calling her on her bullshit even as annoying as she can be lol. I don't know what Kagome deserves at this point, but she's gotta get her shit together for sure. Hopefully Rin will stay trusting despite the whole Kohaku debacle, so they can all unite against this Ren guy. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 39) - Wed 14 Apr 2021

She's messing up her friendships!!!! C'mon Kagome! She's killin me. Ugh after the recent side story I'm not even surprised Kanako would do something like that. Kagome needs to kick her out already lmao everyone fed up with her. Poor Rin. She's the last one I wanted hurt in this story. Nobody gets spared huh? I wonder what she was going to say about Sesshomaru though! Why hasn't Rin tried with Sesshomaru or vice versa? I hope she moves on from Kohaku but I kind of want them to move forward from this. Since they weren't together it's not really a betrayal on either part. Mostly I want Kagome to leave and heal. Cus she's fuckin shit up. It was nice to get perspective on what the relationship with her and Inuyasha actually was instead of what her fucked up memory tells her. Ahhh please update soon!!!!


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 38) - Tue 16 Mar 2021

Definitely, Kagome needs to take care of Ren, he's someone... Dangerous. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 38) - Mon 15 Mar 2021

I am going to not read the main story on your ficaholic page. Try to not spoil myself lol I'll spend all day on there if I allow myself to. So I'm going to pace myself. But I will check back regularly for the side stories!! I knew dude was gonna try and trap her from the start. Sneaky bastard. She should kick them to the curb! Orrrr find a way to make them obey her since she's on a lil power streak. I can't wait to find out! Please update soon! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 37) - Wed 03 Mar 2021

Definitely, he has the control now. I'm very curious about what is the thing that she has to remember. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 37) - Mon 15 Feb 2021

I'm strangely pleased with this. No progress has been made but some has and I can't explain how lol. I wonder what he wants her to remember!!! I've been holding off on reading the short stories on your ficaholic page but I think I'm going to go check them out, maybe they can hold me over in between updates! I love this. Please update soon! 


Sophtt (Chapter 37) - Mon 15 Feb 2021

I don't even know what to say...I didn't even noticed I was holding my breath at the end until I finished. Your writing is marvelous as always and the feelings you're portraying are so complex. I can't help but wish for kagome to fully give in to sesshoumaru but I'm afraid of what will happen to her if that happens. I can't shake the feeling that there's a lot sesshoumaru is not telling kagome and I can't wait to see what it will be. Thank you for the wonderful update


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 36) - Thu 11 Feb 2021

She's losing her control and Sesshomaru, well, he's in charge now. 


Mcsnuffy (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Feb 2021

I hate to comment or leave reviews but seriously update you have me on edge my seat waiting 


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 36) - Tue 02 Feb 2021

Why! Why would you leave it there! I'm really hoping that the next chapter is then ravaging each other with their built up sexual frustration. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 36) - Mon 01 Feb 2021

It's nice to see him be the tease! I enjoyed that far too much. She's always holding out on him like she doesn't want it. She should just give in. But I don't want her to at the same time. I could enjoy their game a while longer lol please update soon!! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 35) - Sun 31 Jan 2021

Dear Lord in heaven! This was incredible, they have a heart to heart conversation, and I love it. 


Mecca (Chapter 35) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

I would be such a sucker just like Kagome. That ending line was chilling. Most definitely can not unsee and undo certain things now. Thank you for the update!


Young Kagome (Chapter 35) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

Wow is it bad that I want her to get it on with Hirokin? I couldn't tell if she's hinting that he wants Sesshomaru from her he doesn't want any woman statement. That's almost what I got from it. But then he said he wanted her so I'm like ok no that's not it lol. Maybe he just wants power more than a woman. That's my conclusion for now. It would be a beautiful twist to see her go to the darker side lol. But ofc I want her with Sesshomaru. A lil fling on the side wouldn't hurt? But Hirokin doesn't want a fling. Ugh. How disappointing. It would be nice to see Sesshomaru jealous. Would he even get jealous? I don't think so. I do think I love this chapter though. Please update soon! 


Mecca (Chapter 34) - Tue 29 Dec 2020

Thank you for the update! I hope you had a great holiday! I'm still following this story on your blog and am always looking forward to seeing another installment :) It seems like Kagome is doing that whole "Look at me, I'm your captain now" dynamic with everyone she knows, it's kind of funny. Who's the tyrant again? Lol 


Young Kagome (Chapter 34) - Tue 29 Dec 2020

You gave us two chapters in one!! You must love us. Oh no Kaede! I feel like everyone Kagome knew before is sick of her shit lol. I don't understand that whole interaction between her & Sesshomaru. Was he really trying to look out for her? Or is she just defensive of everyone? What is she forgetting that he wants her to remember? Confusion!!! I am guessing time will tell. Please update soon! 


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