Reviews for Control by wonderbug

Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Tue 18 Sep 2018
good a story....i think sesshoumaru is the demon?but maybe not....just try to guess it.

Eryn (Chapter 4) - Fri 14 Sep 2018

I have a bad feeling about this..


VS (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Sep 2018

Hello,

this fic is just AWESOME!!! I'm definitely going to follow this story! It's refreshing to read a story where Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't fall in love withing the first chapter! So thank you very much!!!

When and why did Sesshoumaru develop his problem? How did Kagome find out and what was her reaction? Who is this youkai who is killing the girls? What is Kagome's theory? And why were Sango and Kohaku reacting so strange after Kagome explained her thoughts?

Gosh there is so much I want to know. You got me all excited here!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Pamelamoores (Chapter 3) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

Hopefully, you are still hoping to update and complete soon...  looks like Sesshamaru is obsessed with Kagome, and rapes and kills others who look like her, since he can't have her. Can't wait to read more!


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Sep 2018

This is getting even more interesting. I’m looking forward to reading more. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Sep 2018

This is a very fascinating story and it is very well written also.

I get the impression that Kagome's investigation of the murdered girls are going to lead her back to someone she knows that is the killer.

I think that monster is Sesshomaru's beast as the one that is killing those girls so viciously, but it seems that Sesshomaru is aware of his beast's motives for doing what it is doing. I think his beast has gone off the deep end for some reason and Sesshomaru cannot control it.

This is a very dark and sad tale.  At first I thought maybe he was obsessing over Kagome and maybe even in love with Kagome but I think not now.  It seems to be something else entirely.  Did Sesshomaru kill Inuyasha?

Looking forward to further updates or not...I'm not sure because I'm not to crazy about this type of portrayal of my favorite pairing.  But you have drawn me into this story now.

Wonderful writing!!!


Eryn (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Sep 2018

The anticipation!


Inuyaoi (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Sep 2018

Ugh the dead body grossed me out. So really, great writing. Im left with questions and look forward to the next chapter. 


Mulata (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Sep 2018

OH MY GOD YOUR STORY IS SO GOOD. Really, your grammar is very good and the text nicely structured. And the plot, oh the plot is amazing. Please keep posting it! Good writers are rare nowadays. 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 2) - Sun 02 Sep 2018

This storyline is so fascinating. Looking forward to reading more!


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Sep 2018

To tell you the truth  I don't want to read this fic. By the summary and seeing the genre is dark angst and no romance ... I can see a twin piece of stasis. Just because it's written  by you and because I admire your talent  I have given it a try. And was caught in the Web of your woven words. I do want to read it but I know no happy ending is possible and I personally don't like when Sesshomaru is portrayed as obsessive and crazy without reason. I mean many authors don't look deeper on his character and yay let's make him a psycho rapist. I am not saying it as something bad. Every author has his own vision.. The thing is I think I am not strong enough to stomach such a dark fiction at the moment. So I apologise in advance. I love your writing and you Really are talented but I would like to ask you to post some other of your work as well. Even if dark but with a good ending, no not unicorns and  butterflies,  but normal I would be very grateful and happy. I don't always remember to visit your blog  but Dokuga has that subscription thing which I love!.

That being said I wish you good luck with your fic. Take care of yourself and Thx again for writing! 


Tessitura (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

now this chapter, full of drama and mystery sets the tone.  the first was a shock and a wow


SammyJams (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Excited to see where this is going on how they get there! Can’t wait for more!


Mary J Dolph (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Sesshomaru is the killer, isn't he?


Cheyanna (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Thanks for the update. I look forward to more!!;) 


Inuyaoi (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Yes I will be following this story closely so I hope you continue it. I had already read this chapter on your blog because I needed more. I'm very fond of your writing voice, it flows like water and you paint quite the picture in my head. Your darkness is appreciated too. 


SammyJams (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Aug 2018

Wow - awesome beginning! I can’t wait for more!


Keo (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Aug 2018

I love this! Can't wait for more!


Inuyaoi (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Aug 2018

Alright I'm not gonna lie, when Kagome said "show me"  I thought oh wait and I brought my phone a little closer to my face. Very hot. 


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