Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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SammyJams (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Nov 2018

Awesome update! Can’t wait for the next one!


Eliona (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Nov 2018

I am so excited for what is going to come next! Things are starting to get really into depth, so very intriguing! Looking forward to your next update :)


ponpiri (Chapter 12) - Sat 10 Nov 2018

Interesting. For a second there I thought you were going to throw a 2004-fanfic-era curveball and say that their father's spirit was trying to regain control through his sons. LOL!

Anyway, so that's why Tetsusaiga was speaking to Inuyasha. Just a warning that his brother is about to go HAM since the swords are connected. What happened to Tenseiga? And idk... seems like Kago is missing a piece of the puzzle. Seems like she's his taste, not these random broads that happen to have dark hair, fair skin, spunky personalities and latent miko abilities.

Also, somehow this exchanged reminded me of Clarice and Hannibal.


Alison (Chapter 12) - Fri 09 Nov 2018

More More More!!!!!


Blommie8 (Chapter 12) - Fri 09 Nov 2018
does it means why sesshoumaru prefer human because of kagome? maybe he wanted her all a long?before inuyasha died? maybe the beast need kagome so he begun to sleep with human but he never satisfied?so he kill them because they're not kagome. he only wanted kagome all this time. please forgive him kagome....

Mysheeki (Chapter 11) - Wed 24 Oct 2018

Ahhhhhhh!!! I am screaming internally! You’re good, oh your writing is as always fantastic  What a chapter!!! Ahhhhh! :)


ponpiri (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

This was a great chapter. I knew kagome would end up feeling regretful for what she did. Those miko garments can't cover up internal shame.


Blommie8 (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Eliona (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Oct 2018

These cliff hangers are like on another level though xD dang... and Kohaku’s words! My goodness you are so good at really expressing character emotions. Keep up the great work xD 


FayeMegan (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Oct 2018

So angsty, but I can't stop reading.


ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

Well, damn.


ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

Well, damn.


randomfan17 (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I couldn't put it down.  No describing how much I loved it. 


witty (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I've been on the edge of my seat since chapter 1. You have revived my interest in sesshomaru/kagome. Thank you! 


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018
no sesshy-kun..

Eliona (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

That was surprisingly hot! I had never read a lime with Kohaku and Kagome, so it was really unique and well done. Great job! You’ve got excellent writing :) very excited to see what you have in store next. 


Cheyanna (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

I’m looking forward to more! I’ve been reading the blog version but I’m glad this one is catching up! I really love this though. I always look forward to updates! 


SammyJams (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

Super dark and sexual - I love it!


Lorena (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

Oh snap,  this chapter came out of left field,lol. I  never could've imagined it,  but this chapter really did clear up and introduce some things you mentioned so far. My only concern throughout this whole chapter is what will happen the next day? I hope their relationship isn't ruined once she either says it'll never happen again or that it was a mistake- Kagome is a very complex character for me, even harder to figure out than Sesshomaru,  so I cant even begin to figure out what she'll do nexr


Mysheeki (Chapter 9) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Wow. The suspense is awesome! You have a way with the flow of your words? Please continue soon <3


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