Thanks for the update. I look forward to more!!;) 

Yes I will be following this story closely so I hope you continue it. I had already read this chapter on your blog because I needed more. I'm very fond of your writing voice, it flows like water and you paint quite the picture in my head. Your darkness is appreciated too. 

Wow - awesome beginning! I can’t wait for more!

I love this! Can't wait for more!

Alright I'm not gonna lie, when Kagome said "show me"  I thought oh wait and I brought my phone a little closer to my face. Very hot.