Reviews for Priceless by Cassie

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elisa128 (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Great start to your story, I've been a little disappointed  with stories that have been out lately thank you for writing I look forward to more chapters in the future,


candy (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

I like it keep going with this one. Hopefully you can make it less dark as the story goes. Can't wait for more.


Susy V (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

This sounds good! I hope to see more of the beast, he’s always a fun character to read. And I love to see how the relationship progresses. 


Monique (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

I like it . can't wait for the next one....????


maria (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Me encanta keep this up it's great.!!!!!


Chelsea (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Love it so far!! Keep up the awesome work.


Sexy sesshy (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Love it! 

 

Please update soon!


Christina (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

I like the start of the story. I will wait to give a more extensive review in a few more chapters. 


Toni (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

really like this story  please keep writing it  


Jean (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

What a way to meet your fate intended mate. So far interesting story. Looking forwards to your future updates.

 


Blue (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

It seems interesting so far. Can't wait for the next chapter


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Oh man it sounds like Kagome has had a really rough life. I'm really looking forward to seeing the next update and I'll be back as soon as possibl!!


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

I’m enamored so far! I love how this is progressing!

SN:  Good luck on your upcoming semester! Hope you update soon! 


jenny (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

wow, what a good story.


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

I like it so far! Very interesting...dark..but real. Stuff like this happens and we gotta talk about it sometime. Would love to see you continue ! 


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

Oh how very interesting!! This is a new spin, I feel. I really like your writing style and that you use proper grammar - bless you!!

 

Cannot wait for the next update!


Lia (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

I really like this and I hope you continue this story. I'm wondering what caused her to want to commit suicide. Don't apologize for long chapters. Usually I wish authors would make them longer after I've waited to read what happens next. I was very glad to read the part that nobody can dispute the mating. I'm so tired of reading otherwise good stories where Kagome is constantly challenged for her position as Sesshomaru's mate. It's tedious and so overused. It cheapens the depth of commitment mating is supposed to have versus marriage, and really doesn't say much for your mate's love for you if they'd put up with someone attacking you to take your place. I liked how you explained the background of this story's world and Sesshomaru's position in it. Taisho Industries as a safe haven for demons that also provides necessary goods and services for their special needs was a clever idea. So far Priceless has great potential and I look forward to reading more.


Roseanna (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

Just found this story when looking at the recent updates and new chapters listing.  I really like how it starts out, with the explanation of the history over the last 500 years, demons integrating, and Sesshomaru's involvement in society.  I also like how quickly things led to where the first chapter ended; it wasn't drawn out where it would take a lot of time (and chapters) for the two to meet, but the chapter gave enough information on why they met as they did.

As far as the gory blood thing, it doesn't bother me.  While it might bother others, the situation described unfortunately happens in society.  The chapter doesn't give the reasons for Kagome's (I assume it's Kagome) situation, and I look forward to future chapters providing those details.  And with it, the resulting interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome.

Please consider keeping this story, and continue writing chapters.  I hope to read more soon!  :)


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