It felt like a teaser because of what happened before and my excitement about what's coming next,lol. I an so glad to see this chapter though, to read Sesshomaru's part in this and why it was taking so long to track her down- PLEASE TELL ME IF INUYASHA HAS A PART IN THIS SOON, I can't put it past him to be as terrible as this, but it's still a terrible thing to do especially because I dont really know what they plan to do with her
Great chapter! Thanks for updating!
Well...DARN! Had to figure Naraku would be involved some how.
Short but nice exciting chapter.
Sessho will find her and I feel that Kagome's powers will somehow kick in so she can fight back and not become a victim.
I just know that you will, at some point, elaborate with a backstory on when, how and why Kikyou, Naraku and Kagome came to be in this situation, right? lol :|
Nice writing and looking forward to the next chapters.
Great job!!!
Wow that was heart stomping. Poor Kagome, always in a fix and now the duo team of evil is back. I hope Kagome's brain starts kicking in to help save her life and how the hell did not Sesshomaru or anyone notice Kagome missing. So much time has passed that you updated and I'm glad you did. This was short but insightful. Update soon.
Well, this chapter was a total surprise.
Always Kagome is the under dog and Kikyou and Naraku the arch villains of the piece. lol :)
Got to shake it up and make it more interesting in some kind of way, right?
Nice writing and looking forward to more chapters.
Amazing story!!!! Update soon!!!!!
NOOOOOO....oh please don't hurt her she was doing so well ugh...
AWK! Cliffhanger! Well DARN!!!
Lovely chapter and a nice surprise for Kagome and Rin.
Looking forward to see what happens next. Keep updating
Aw...you did fine. You don’t have to go over the top. That was probably just about right for where they are. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating. Cheers!
Very sweet chapter, except for the cliffy...ugh!
Always seem to be a double edged sword swinging like a pendulum over poor Kagome's head.
Just when she comes to a realization and a happy moment, then swoosh...that fatal slice into her happy moment.
I can only think of one person that hates her that much and the dark figure just has to be Kikyou...dum-dee-dum...dum!!!
Keep it coming and hopefully a little bit longer. :)
Excellent writing!!!
AHHHHHH!
Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Mon 05 Nov 2018
Nooooo! Don't leave off there!! That's too much suspense, lol! But it's gotta be Kikyo! Grrrr.... that witch angers me! I love how well you write all the characters, it truly pulls me into the story. Please, please, please let Sesshomaru find Kagome quickly!!! ... and I kinda hope Kagome ends up kicking Kikyo's a**, lol! You are an excellent writer, I so love the story! Keep up the awesome work!!
Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Mon 05 Nov 2018
I am so in love with this story! All the sweet moments have me smiling so much! I love both Sesshomaru and Kagome's personalities so much! I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Can't wait to read more. Kikyo for sure is planning something and I wanted to ask if a bit of that will be released next chapter.
Nilee1 (Chapter 20) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
That was a lovely chapter. I found myself smiling as I read.
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