Aw...you did fine. You don’t have to go over the top. That was probably just about right for where they are. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating. Cheers!
Very sweet chapter, except for the cliffy...ugh!
Always seem to be a double edged sword swinging like a pendulum over poor Kagome's head.
Just when she comes to a realization and a happy moment, then swoosh...that fatal slice into her happy moment.
I can only think of one person that hates her that much and the dark figure just has to be Kikyou...dum-dee-dum...dum!!!
Keep it coming and hopefully a little bit longer. :)
Excellent writing!!!
AHHHHHH!
Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Mon 05 Nov 2018
Nooooo! Don't leave off there!! That's too much suspense, lol! But it's gotta be Kikyo! Grrrr.... that witch angers me! I love how well you write all the characters, it truly pulls me into the story. Please, please, please let Sesshomaru find Kagome quickly!!! ... and I kinda hope Kagome ends up kicking Kikyo's a**, lol! You are an excellent writer, I so love the story! Keep up the awesome work!!
Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Mon 05 Nov 2018
I am so in love with this story! All the sweet moments have me smiling so much! I love both Sesshomaru and Kagome's personalities so much! I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Can't wait to read more. Kikyo for sure is planning something and I wanted to ask if a bit of that will be released next chapter.
Nilee1 (Chapter 20) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
That was a lovely chapter. I found myself smiling as I read.
Kimmy (Chapter 19) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
I thought it was good no worries if it’s not your strongest trait you can always work on it you probably could even have other writers help you. Doesnt hurt to try and reach out and get pointer MissKitt is a great writer when it comes to these kinds of scenes.
candy (Chapter 19) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
I thought it was great you did a good job with it. I would go back on what kagome said pease needs to be please. That all I can say keep up the good work and update soon.
Flamethemightydragon (Chapter 19) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
I really liked this chapter and thought you did a great job with the line. I can't wait to read more, this has quickly become one of my favoriate stories.
jess (Chapter 19) - Wed 31 Oct 2018
that was a good chapter, you did really good for your first
Loveyaa (Chapter 18) - Sun 21 Oct 2018
It's interesting how you sometimes insert the narrater in the story, but I can't wait to see Kagome face her fears. I'm sure time and support are what she need and I can't wait to see what happens next since she's found those :)
Can't wait to see where this story is going!
Oh girl! Lots on your plate but all this will pass. Life lives to mess with us. Stay strong and focused. Update when you are able. I’m glad they were all able to move through that moment. Hugs to you.
Deb (Chapter 18) - Thu 11 Oct 2018
Sorry to hear about your unfortunate string of IRL events. Good news is that keeping positive helps make the bad not so bad and helps you get more positive things in your life
This was a rough chapter for all of the characters. I wonder if that was foreshadowing I saw at the end~ I'm curious to see if Kagome goes back to work and continues to get her confidence back
That was a great chapter by the way..... I can't wait until Kagome tells Kikyo's mom everything including what she did about her father's death.... Boy ol' boy its getting started, then the fun can begin..... lol
Please update ASAP truly love this fic.
Taylor (Chapter 17) - Wed 03 Oct 2018
Omg i am on the edge of my seat please please udate soon
Please, hurry with another chapter.
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