Reviews for Forced to mate by Natalia

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Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 16) - Thu 01 Feb 2018

I am so happy for you jii-san!!

Hahaha XD


FayeMegan (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Yay thanks for the update!! I love it .


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

That was cute. You might work on your transitions between chapters. Every once in a while it gets confusing and I have to go back and re-read parts to explain the sudden changes


kb (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Loved this chapter! Kagome is true to character with her rapid changing emotions as her quick thoughts and insecurities keep them ever changing. Shiroheki needs to watch himself around her if he continues playing games with her and Sesshomaru 


Ryo chan (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

This was so good, hope you update soon


critique (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

I feel as if this chapter was pushed to hard. Kagome mood change from yelling pervert to "there's no way sesshomaru would be disrespectful." it was a very forced switch from embarrassed to denial. It didn't flow together, I believe it's in the wording and how it's said together. Other than that it was good, I don't really understand what lead to sesshomaru "willingly" use his mokomoko tail... thing. It felt out of character so early in the story. 

However, I did enjoy it. Keep up the good work.


beachvilla (Chapter 17) - Wed 31 Jan 2018

Really enjoying this story!  


Nilee1 (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Too cute :-)

 


KShadeslady (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

LOL!!! Too darn funny! Well played Kags! Wonderful update. Thank you!


KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Treading on thin i there Kagome but stand your ground girl! Lovely update. Thanks so much! Glad you are back. Hope that all is well. 


kb (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Excellent chapter! I loved the grandfathers reaction to Sesshomaru looking at Kagomes chest XD


Samantha Olson (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Jan 2018

Looking forward to the next chapter! 


FayeMegan (Chapter 15) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Uh ohhh! Can't wait for more!!


Mona (Chapter 15) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Hoping for another update soon!  I cannot wait to read Inuyasha’s reaction as well as their reaction to Kagome’s and Shippo’s relationship (mother/son bond).


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

LOL! Had to poke that bear! Lovely update. Thank you!


Mars (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

Shit just got *real*. 

I hope Sesshoumaru's mother is humbled by Kagome's abilities and powers. 


kb (Chapter 13) - Thu 11 Jan 2018

Excellent chapter. I love the soft tone you have kagome at the end and the way you had her put Sesshomaru’s perspective in place. Shes much more mature in this fic than in canon 


Ryo chan (Chapter 13) - Thu 11 Jan 2018

Oh please update soon, I adore your kagome and sesshomaru 


FayeMegan (Chapter 13) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Yaayy such a long chapter!! Can't wait to see what his mom is going to do


kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

I love reading the updates for this story!  I can't wait to see what his mom will say about Rin and Kagome's predicaments.  


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