I just re-read this story again and I still love it. It is one of my favorites.
Very nicely written chapter. Poor Kagome and her battered heart.
I like how you portray Kagome. She is strong but still vunerable in matters concerning her heart.
I do not blame her for leaving the way she did but I know Sesshomaru will more than likely go after her to bring her back.
I understand why Sess' mother is treating Kagome the way that she has...she is testing her mettle to see if she will make a good Lady of the West.
I think Asuna really does like Kagome but she has to press her buttons to see if she can handle the rigors of the position and so far Kagome
seems to be able to hold her own except when it comes to Inuyasha. He seems to be her downfall at the moment.
Also, we know Kagome will not submit to being Sess' mate unless there is love and respect between them. I look forward to that scenario.
Shiroheki is a character that I like...he is a clever and manipulative grandfather but you gotta love him. :) LOL
You are doing a great job with this story, so keep up the good work...looking forward to future updates.
Thank you for updating as fast as you have been doing but RL takes precedence over writing fanfiction so you take care of yourself and family.
Do not stress yourself.
Excellent job!!!
Cheers!!!
kB (Chapter 23) - Fri 20 Apr 2018
Love this chapter! Kagome is written well here and her reaction to everything is very logical. I’m glad she is standing for herself by removing herself from the situation. Sometimes the best thing to do is to just leave.
I am weak Against angustia D:
But still I want to hit Something... Or someone!!! Preferably you know who ¬¬*
LOL! She basically just flipped them all off. Can’t say I blame her! If I remember right, you have a small child...no apologies necessary! You get to it when you get to it. Thanks so much for updating!
Happy to see an update, but take care of yourself, yes? Hope everything turns out wel and gets calmers soon. ♥ Cheers and thanks for the amazing story so far! :)
Aww poor Kagome. I hope you're able to update again soon!
I don't know if you know this but there are three snapped patients chapters but I'm glad she chooses to be herself.
Sayuri (Chapter 23) - Thu 19 Apr 2018
omg!! I so love it!!! poor little kagome~ i hope she will get better soon! :sigh: And I so love the grandfather!! XDDD
I just want to smack Inuyasha SO hard!! Not to mention Sesshomaru‘s mom... she makes my blood boil geeze! Kagome must‘ve looked so beautiful!!!! I can’t wait to read more!!! ;)
Oh boy, I can just imagine how mad they're all going to be when they find out she took off like that! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cant wait for the next update
So cute, also love sesshomaru inner dialog, also happy moms day we don't celebrate ours until may in my country ???? so you'll probably get it twice from me lol
Awwww Inuyasha is so mean!!! But I like Sesshomaru's little inner confessions. I really look forward to your next update.
What a wonderful update! Oh yeah! That hook is deeper than he knows! Thank you!
I can’t wait to read more!! Thanks for the update!!;)
Sayuri (Chapter 21) - Fri 09 Mar 2018
Omg omg omg omg!!!! I love it!!!
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