Lmao to beautiful, I love the spunk of your kagome can't wait for the next chapter
Oddly I thought of Sean Kingston's song, when he goes "you're way too beautiful, girl".... Great story, I kinda want to search for the original version to continue to read b/c I hate waiting... 8=)
Oh DEAR! Kagome!! The things that come dancing out of her mouth! Too funny. LOVED this chapter so much. Thanks for updating. Cheers!
I'm sorry but at first I was like you tell them kagome, until that last part. Too beautiful? Oh my god! That was so funny! I couldn't help but laugh! I am loving your story.
Dani (Chapter 8) - Thu 04 Jan 2018
I am absolutely in love with this story and the way it is playing out. All your back to back updates help me stay right on track with the story :)
I agree with Kagome. I love Sesshomaru but geeze my skin and hair can’t look that good on a good day. That and I am not that graceful especially with flipping my hair! Can’t wait until you update!!!
Miss C (Chapter 8) - Thu 04 Jan 2018
LOL too beautiful!
Mars (Chapter 8) - Thu 04 Jan 2018
I really like this story.
ACK! Such a cliffie! This is getting great! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Kagome on the spot! LOL!
ahhh I wanna know what she says!! Update soon please
Why can't you be longer lol awesome chapter can't wait for the next update
Haha that's fynny, I can't wait to see where this goes.
Get ‘en Kags! Another lovely update. Thank you and HNY to you!
kB (Chapter 6) - Mon 01 Jan 2018
Oh the suspense!
Great fic, and good cliff hanger!
Ah....giggle! Delightful! Thank you for updating this sweet funny story.
Beautiful, as always wish it was longer but that's just because I enjoy your work lol also poor jaken
Ohh! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
really enjoying granddads scheming ways he locked everyone but family out didnt he? lol and kagome that is please update soon
alexis (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Oct 2017
hi my name is alexis jsut wanted to stop by and say you are doing great. i dont know whatr the othersites members problem is but they are just dumb. i can see you are going to turn this into an amazing piece of work. dont let what those keybored worriers told u deter you from what you want to do. they are just that! keybored worriers they dont have anything but tie but to discerrege people like who (writers) from doing something you love. they are just butt hurt that they can not write nor they are not as original as you are coming up with becasue i havetn read one like this before! so keep up the good work and i cant wait till the next you update!!!
Leaora (Chapter 4) - Fri 27 Oct 2017
Very funny so far. Keep it coming!
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