I'm excited to see an update on this story, thank you! Used this opportunity to reread the previous chapters and I still love this story so much!
It was interesting to read about Sesshoumaru's background. Working with an ex can be very difficult and I guess in his position even more so since he's still wearing the engagement ring where Kagura took it off already.
It seems like Sesshoumaru hasn't finished with this chapter of his past - or at least hadn't. His last action will be the beginning of a new chapter. I loved the wording of the last chapter, so powerful! <3
Hello,
I just found your story and I have to say, that I enjoyed it so far very much!
It was funny seeing Kagome's indecision at the beginning, especially her fear if people in the café will know that she just made a profile in a dating website :)
I liked that you described the scene in the train from two perspectives. This is always interesting, because we can compare directly how both of them view the meeting. So for example Kagome heard only a "Hn" and saw that he was looking down on her, while we read in the perspective of Sesshoumaru that he was amused and actually chuckling! You showed how different people perceive the same situation. I would love it, if you could write more chapters like this!!!
This Kenta guy was really not worth her time. But I support your decision to let Kagome make some experience with the other sex before she starts to date Sesshoumaru. She doesn't have to be always this inexperienced, naive girl!
I'm curious to see, if Sesshoumaru and Kagome will be "compatible" in the eyes of the dating site. Although I would not see it as a problem, if they would actually continue to meet each other randomly in real life. You started this story with the dating site, but who said, that they have to find to each other through this site? So maybe your story would show, that those sites are not perfect and that you can find someone on your own in real life? It it only a thought, but it would be an interesting and unexpected twist ;)
Anyways, this is a nice story and I'm looking forward to your next update!
Jyakotsu is such a sweetheart! Poor Kags though! Kenta is such a turd~.
Oh she does deserve the best. And by the best it only means a certain inuyoukai... *nudge wink*
ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Nov 2017
Lmao! This is very realistic.
Very nice! What a great friend! She does deserve the best. Thanks for this wonderful set of updates. They made my day! Cheers!
It figures! That’s all he was looking for. Good for you Kagome! I love a gal with some self respect. Nice update. Yes, it does look like she’ll have to go through a few frogs or toads!
Go Sango! That would be my friends! So glad I don’t have to deal with modern dating. What a crazy world! Hopefully, it isn’t with Hojo! LOL! Kagome will have to wade through the frogs to reach her prince. Thanks for updating.
That was so cute! I especially liked Kagome's comments on the beard guy and Kouga's daring (seriously, how did he survive?). I half expected Sesshomaru's mom or Inuyasha to have done a profile for him.
you might want to change the 120 million people in tokyo to just 10 million, I think if there were 120 million here in this city you would never get on a train, they are already crowded most of the day and packed solid at night.
Nicole (Chapter 10) - Mon 27 Nov 2017
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