I'm really curious to see what their tentative friendship will look like. I've really enjoyed this story so far - the elements of humour have been really funny (I laughed out loud several times) and your Sesshoumaru is so on point it makes everything funnier. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what comes next.
despite how that ended, i felt sort of bad fer sesshoumaru. humans can really ruin a good thing, and youkai having to adapt seems really unfair. especially since it's humans that ruin their homes and they can't even do anything about it. i also found him cute, tbh. XD maybe it's just me being obsessed with sesshoumaru, but even his off putting mannerisms make me all giddy. i suppose that would be different if he was real, though....
Kanda (Chapter 4) - Wed 09 Aug 2017
d'aw, i always love a moment between kagome and her mom. its just nice to know that someone took the time to give her a past and not make her some side figure. ...something i'm guilty of, but! in my defense, she's not really integral. ...at least, none that i know of now... anyway! i flipped back to review this chapter cuz o wanted to mention the whole bond thing. it was cute, loved it. <3
Ok, this story is absolutely bloody brilliant! The plot is fantastic!!!! Your writing is very in-depth and heartfelt...I get multiplie feels in each chapter, whether it be me laughing about something that was said or a particular situation that I can visualize, smiling at something cute that occured, or a feeling of sadness over Kagome's, as well as Sesshomaru's, situation. Ultimately, you make me feel like I am there with the characters and you make your characters very relatable, personality/feelings wise especially, even if we as readers can not specifically relate to their situations/experiences. I am obviously loving the blossoming relationship between Sesshomaru and Kags... their progression is very realistic and is just at the right pace. I was particularly obessesd with the last chapter where Kagome brought a peace offering cake to Sessh. That was without-a-doubt hilarious! I am looking forward to reading what you come up with next and keep up the amazing work! =)
Nile (Chapter 6) - Tue 01 Aug 2017
Not sure where this is going, but I like it. I can't wait to read more. I hope Kagome gets a good job... by luck, of course.
Cute with the cake... guess Sesshoumaru even likes cake. :)
OMG, this chapter had me rolling!!! I loved the cake conversation and the "wall of positivity" bit. Just amazing!!!! Keep up the good work. :)
Cake always wins!
Leaora (Chapter 6) - Mon 31 Jul 2017
This was knee slappingly hilarious! Kagome used wall of positivity. It was very effective. Sesshomaru is befuddled. I can't wait to see where this road leads.
Violla (Chapter 6) - Sun 30 Jul 2017
Bellissima storia
Omg! This last chapter has me rolling! Oh gods above! I can't breathe!
Yessss! Good job, Kagome and Kagome's mom! Win over that salty, cranky old dog with kindness! No one can say no to cake!
This is such a great fic! I'm looking forward to more updates!
This is a good fic! I'm thoroughly enjoying this story so far. I hope you find time to update it!
Keep up the excellent work!
- CA
aww poor inuyasha being gone. This is a fascinating story. I can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!
OK, didn't expect Sesshoumaru to be job free. He didn't strike me as a someone who'd relax all day. Haha.. Nice story so far. Hope to read more soon!
I was reading this before bed last night, and I ended up dreaming about Sesshoumaru going on a date with Kagome! Hahaha.. Please make this come true somehow? But exclude Jaken. I don't know why Jaken came into my dream too. Lol. XD
Update soon please!
DevaG (Chapter 5) - Sun 28 May 2017
So, I am in love and ready for the next chapters! I love where this is going and I cant wait for the chemistry to kick off. Please update soon!
Miss C (Chapter 5) - Thu 25 May 2017
Good Story! I wonder what will happen in the tub. LOL
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