Yooo that ending was BLESSED. Sesshomaru just admitted he was dramatic ! Im done. XD
I was truly entertained and so happy you are working on this again. You have gotten even better than before with your detail narrative, Im so proud. Will be kepping an eye out for the next chappi!!
S.O.B.'s To Do List:
Take parking spot
Break coffee mug
Steal sunglasses
Ensure entertainingly destructive choas engulfs building
Tell boss he's #1 using appropriate gesture
Make readers laugh asses off
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Loved this.
Oh wow I loved the story.... The begining was boring now that was done the tenth chap was totally awesome. I can't wait to read more. This has a great making into a grand story. I can' t wait to see what hell Kagome goes through update soon.....
Toni (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Aug 2018
great chapter can't wait for more love the story line
Jean (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Aug 2018
Oh my god, the Sesshomaru in this chapter was amazing. Really enjoyed this chapter and how you portrayed him especially the bit with the sunglasses and giving the finger to the man. Can't wait for the next chapter update, great story
Channy (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Aug 2018
I had totally forgotten about this and re-read it all yesterday to catch up and then today seen this update. I love love love this chapter. I enjoyed the story from the get go, but these past 2 chapters have really pulled me in and snagged me! Sesshomaru in this chapter was amazing! That ending though. Scared my cats off with my laughter. Love it!
Leaora (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Aug 2018
Now, you already know that I love everything you do, but this.... I don't think I have laughed so hard at anything in a very long time! My sides hurt!!!
HAHAHAHAHA!!
I love that Sesshoumaru gives absolutely zero f*cks. Just flips the bird as he drives away! Amazing. And Kagome blasting a hole in the wall is *chef's kiss*. I can't wait to see what kind of training Sesshoumaru is going to put her through. And general hijinks and sarcasm between these two is perfect.
I'm not sure if I've left a review for the previous chapters, but I'm really loving this story. Please keep up the amazing work!
Oh my god, this chapter was the best!!!! Just all of the little machinations that came together I’m the end. Absolutely amazing!!! XD
Jamie (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Aug 2018
Never would have thought Sesshomaru would be a Kansas fan... but omg, that's entertaining! Some tears were shed, and actual laughter was heard. Love to see where things go from here!
This gave me LIFE. I had totally forgot that I had saved this story so seeing the notification for an update got me giddy and I was not dissapointed! You have an awesome writing style that puts you in the environment and makes the reading even more enjoyable. I love it!
The last chapter got me weak~ Sess blasting some hardcore music is the last thing Kagome or the audience thought he would play- Genius!
I am loving this so far! I cant wait for the next chapter.
I'm glad to see you've updated. I find I'm a bit of a pessimist concerning the probability of unfinished stories being updated out of the blue. It's refreshing to have the cynic in me bitch slapped now and then (recovers and does dance of joy). Kansas... huh? Snort. I'm still snickering about that.
Maybe some explanations as to how they did nothing when Inuyasha was running around in the modern time.
Ivy (Chapter 8) - Mon 06 Aug 2018
Are you ever going to finish this :(
I love this story! I can't wait to see how Kagome's interview goes. I like that her adventures are so normal yet not.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Feb 2018
I just discovered your story. I'm loving it.
Yes yes yes also I need to know if Shippo is alive
Jean (Chapter 8) - Tue 26 Sep 2017
What a wonderful story, I'm so glad to have found it! You have done an excellent job on Sess' personality and the way the story is progressing. It is very well written also. I can't wait for the next chapters!
I was so glad to find this story had been updated after quite a while.
Kagome getting herself tangled up with those ruffians was kind of stupid of her but she, like she said, was not thinking straight. And again, not thinking, she snoops around Sessho's room. Did she forget that he has superior smelling and that he would be able to pick up her scent in every part of his room including putting her hands on anything she touched? I wonder if he has been in his room yet or if he has he's not saying anything just yet, hmmm.
I loved her conversation with Buyo and I Lmao when he jumped on her painful stomach and she yells out "I trusted you..." that was just too funny.
Kagome seems to have forgotten about any other demons that may have survived to her era such as Shippo but since she may be going to work for Sango and Miroku's decendants, he and others may show up.
Anyway, nicely written and enjoyed reading the story again. Looking forward to future chapters soon.
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