I TRULY love this story but I wish sesshoumaru had more of a part. He just seems to be a side character who makes an occasional appearance rather than a main interest..
I always look forward to your Update! I can’t wait to read the next one. I feel like this story, Kagome wouldn’t end up with Sessh at the end. He’s pretty much just someone that happened and left. With the way he reacted, it hints to more. Which I think is frustrating and misleading on his part after he just explained that she was just someone interesting that he wanted to get with. I feel so bad for Kouga /:
WritingMage (Chapter 15) - Sun 15 Apr 2018
I love your story, the suspense, the details, everything. I can't wait to read more!
Natalia (Chapter 15) - Sun 15 Apr 2018
Finally a good decision. Not that she was wrong before. She was just not fighting. Many so this so yeah... It's not slwaal easy to get the courage and take a right decision.
Thx for updating. I love this fic.
Will eagerly wait for the next chapter.
ponpiri (Chapter 14) - Thu 29 Mar 2018
He basically told her it's my world and you're just a squirrel trying to get a nut lmao. Poor thing.
What a weird police officer thinking that seeing that would make her feel better .
Eryn (Chapter 14) - Tue 27 Mar 2018
I don't know what it is, but I always love a good villain, and your portrayal of Naraku is boss. Sesshoumaru is also great. His character fits well into the originals self-serving with a purpose sort of lifestyle. Keep at it!
AAWWKK! I wish I could edit these. I totally forgot the doctor visit. Im guessing that Dr Satou and of course, Jinenji are both youkai? Just the comments and her interest in Kagome. Very nice chapter.
Still can’t get over Sessh...hope he is keeping an eye on her. He better not let her down! Okay I’m done ranting! LOLOLOL
That was one amazing chapter! I am a bit pissed at Sessh’s callousness and the whole episode with Kagome. I screwed you all night but I don’t think we need to see each other again...Geez! Official pig status! Then there’s Narakus ‘gift’. She doesn’t need to be alone with him ever! His creepy/scary factor is way off the charts. Eww.... So, moving again? It will be a little easier this time. Sounds like you are in the military. l look forward to your next update. Thank you so much. Cheers!
Glad you got to update. I don't really love such long chapters since I can't read it all in one go and then u have to find my place again and yada yada but it makes sense with you wanting only 4 more chapters and that could have been 3 lol. Good job. I did notice some errors and your lemon kept jumping from present to past tense. Just things to look out for. :)
I love this story . Pulls all the emotions while I am reading it Just wonderful
gjjgfxbhj (Chapter 14) - Sat 24 Mar 2018
yay!! I’m always waiting for an update! My favourite story right now, so good. You’re an amazing author! Thank you for taking the time to create this :)
Your story makes my day <3 gosh, my heart is beating so hard right now!!!!
4 more chapters... I'm excited and sad at the same time:))((
Jennn (Chapter 14) - Fri 23 Mar 2018
I get so excited when you update!! I can’t wait to find out what happens next..!! Yay!
SESSHOMARU NOOOOOOOO. Please, fix this! Tell me she wasn't just a 'passing fancy' for him?! You literally have me on the edge of my seat. Please update soon! </3
AshBee (Chapter 14) - Fri 23 Mar 2018
Talk about rip your heart out! Every time I see this story is updated I get so excited and then you drop this on me! That bastard! How dare he play with her emotions like that! Hopefully he gets put in his place real soon or I might become a blubbering mess for Kagome.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter. :)
Natalia (Chapter 14) - Fri 23 Mar 2018
the whole chapter I had a foreboding feeling when he just pounced on her, it was like: he will ruin everything!...
...and I was right, I hate him and how he behaved, that was just cruel and honourless, like he only used her. feeling depressed over this... kagome is too good not to see that!
and now she is totally at naraku's mercy.
still hoping he will wake up, man up and do the right choice!
thx for updating, good luck with everything in your life!
ponpiri (Chapter 13) - Thu 22 Mar 2018
hmhmhm
I wonder if Sesshou is staying away because he's feeling weird about sexing someone that resembles Rin so much?
Miranda (Chapter 13) - Wed 21 Mar 2018
I love it! This story is so well written and is lately the only reason I come on this site to see if you updated! Keep up the great work!!
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