I really enjoyed this chapter. It was informative and very entertaining.
Thanks for posting this chapter so quickly. I was pleasantly surprised. :)
I loved the interaction between Sess and Kagome. The way it was written made them seem beliveable and in character.
Despite Sesshomaru being very him, sometimes harsh and brutally honest, he actually can be very romantic in his own way. That's what I like about his character and then in the end it comes down to how the writer wants to portray him. I liked your portrait of him.
I loved this story and I love your style of writing.
I believe the Jane Austin paraphrase might be “If the idea that you could ever accomplish such a feat comforts you, feel free to continue in your delusion.” It sounds like something from Pride and Predjudice. It would be like something that Elizabeth would say to the arrogant Mr. Darcy. lol :)
I am sure that I am wrong about that phrase.
I am looking forward to epilouge and the other stories you are working on. Like I said before, I would like to read the sequel first because I want to see how their relationship turned out.
I lost a very close family member yesterday and I was very sad all day until I read this chapter. It helped to take my mind of the situation for a while and cheered me up a bit.
Thank you for sharing!!!
Love this story.....i would like to read the sequel first, please!!!!
Natalia (Chapter 18) - Fri 18 May 2018
My mind is blown away bu your talent. You spun this take such a way that I was confused, crustrfrus and angsty at the same time. I bow to your talent! Sesshoumaru's behaviour, no not transformation, because you kept him hidden in a way. But the way you showed him.... Exquisite! And in character!
Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed! Very much!
Will eagerly waut for more from you. Anything written by you would be beautiful!
I have loved this story!!
fortunately I didn’t jump in until you were about a dozen chapters in so I got to binge read the majority of it. It’s been so riveting the whole way through, and I love how you’ve written Sesshoumaru. He feels genuine.
Im voting (and hoping) to see the sequel first as I’m curious to see what you’ve decided in regard to the evolution of their relationship. But either way I’m super invested in this story!
Can’t wait for the epilogue!!!! Hope you don’t stop
writing Sessh/Kags fics on this site - you’re amazing!
I really liked this chapter. Wonderful writing.
I had to go back and read my previous review on chapter 16...I must have been in some kind of a foul mood when I wrote that. :(
I'm happy that this chapter answered some of my questions and thoughts...thank you for that. :)
I think I am going to wait and read the epilouge before casting my vote on whether a sequel or pov. However, you may have already decided on
which is coming next, I think I would probably want to see the sequel first. Hopefully there will be a favorable outcome for Kagome and
Sesshomaru's relationship in the final chapter.
Looking forward to chapter 18 and the final epilouge.
Excellent job!!!
Meddy (Chapter 17) - Tue 15 May 2018
I would definitely want to read a sequel!
I love it, i love you? i dont want it to end either? <3
Lorena (Chapter 17) - Mon 14 May 2018
Bri g completely honest here, I'm most excited on reading Sesshomaru's Pov, just because I fell like even with all I know right now in regards to him on this story, o really know nothing.
hw (Chapter 17) - Sun 13 May 2018
OOOh so much revealed and things make sense now. I'm super curious about where things end up between them, so my vote is for the sequel to post first then the story from Sesshoumaru's perspective.
It's been fun reading (and re-reading) this story! Sad the journey is ending but all good things must. Or so they say.
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