This is off to a wonderful start. Loads of great details. My anticipation is hightened by the challenges Kagome will face with this great curse. I like the way each chapter is the title of each section of her life for the curse. Very fascinating. Your visual style and notes are great. Looking forward to more. Good luck finding someone-
Ah! Again, another good update. It's interesting to see how her curse is already playing itself out. It's not so much like in cartoons when a piano almost falls on you, or like that Lindsay Lohan film (which i found annoyingly cliche), which is almost what you think of when someone is cursed with extremely bad luck. This is subtle and I find it immensely satisfying. I can't wait to see how things play out in the chapters to come. Thank you for the footnotes (I wasn't aware of the Tsuya/Buddhist traditions). All the best! x
Sounds great so keep it coming girls!
Ariel (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Oct 2016
There's nothing like a well-written story. Can't wait for more.
Oh this is a marvellous story pretense. i really look forward to everything that will befall our favourite heroine.
Just a quickie review; I'm rather obsessed by Shinto shrine culture and am loving this piece so far. I love the links you included too, thank you I can only speculate and am eager for more.
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