I really like this story. I think the kids are going to play a big part in getting Sessho and Kagome to get that merger and maybe get them to be able to get them to play nice with each other. I like the idea of bringing Toga into the game.
Very nicely written and looking forward to future updates.
Treece (Chapter 8) - Tue 27 Sep 2016
Great job! I love the idea of Toga coming into the fray. Can't wait to see how all the threads twist as the tension grows steadier.
Thanks for the update :-)
Lorena (Chapter 8) - Tue 27 Sep 2016
What are the chances that Kagome will help Rin before this date and that'll provide an opening... I just feel like Kagome's going to have it hard enough as it is and I feel bad for both her and Shippo, I would hate for there to make a mistake she unknowingly makes that will destroy her
I LOVE this story! i just spent a good part of the morning reading it - and I cannot wait for more! It is original, but you still have everyone 'in character' while molding them to your story. It's beautifully written, and I love it!!!! Keep up the fabulous work!
~Sandreline
Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Sep 2016
It seems like Sesshomaru has been hurt a lot before, including by his dad. Wouldn't all of this really hurt him? He makes a lot of sacrifices to do that job. While Inuyasha doesn't seem to. He should drop even lower in Sesshomaru's book. I don't see how he could become closer to anyone involved in this. None of this can be passed off as matchmaking. Unless this is a story where they don't get together?
Koree (Chapter 7) - Wed 21 Sep 2016
Lol Ship & Inu is double trouble , great chap
Treece (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Sep 2016
Yay! Another great chapter/ Really enjoying this it. Sorry it had to end so soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Treece (Chapter 6) - Sat 17 Sep 2016
This is story is filled with wonderful descriptions and interesting twists and turns. I enjoyed the appearance of Shippo and Rin, and gaining more of a view into Kagome's homelife with him. Can't wait for Sesshoumaru to reappear again, now that I have figured out a few things. Great job! Update soon please :-)
Koree (Chapter 6) - Thu 15 Sep 2016
Great so far :)
Violla (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Sep 2016
Un altro capitolo molto bello , scrivi molto bene, non vedo l'ora per il prossimo capitolo.
Jennn (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Sep 2016
WOW! I love this story. I cannot wait to read the next chapters!!! update soon please (:
Wow. I am glad that Shippo have someone to talk to at his new school and it so happens to be Rin. At least they both have some things in common.They are both adopted. I hope they both become fast friends and help each other with the bullies. I am liking this story. I like how each characters are being introduce slowly and given a glimpse of their personal ives.
Violla (Chapter 5) - Mon 05 Sep 2016
Un altro capitolo, finalmente spero che nel prossimo più Sessh e kagome baci.
Lorena (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Sep 2016
Sad...is Shippo only icing Kagome out for the paparazzi? I can't see this getting better immediately, but I hope she doesn't lose the people who keep her stable
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