Omfgggggggggg nooooooooo !!! I'm scared for the next chap :( this is probably what Kagura meant
I like the story, don't get me wrong, but I'm so frustrated that Kagome has gone from a strong, intelligent woman to one who is just plain stupid and make stupid mistakes. What happened to kick-ass Kagome? I mean you can't be that naive if you are raising a kid, even if she is young, raising a child would give you some sort of maturity. I am hoping that Kagome changes in the later chapters.
(Chapter 19) - Tue 28 Mar 2017
Initially Kagome was portrayed as a smart, capable business woman. What happened to that? She's too rash and careless in the chapters - her shouting at Sesshoumaru in the very first meeting, her lack of caution after repeated warnings about Naraku.. Her brains arent exactly showing :( Regardless, the story is intriguing. Good job!
That gosh darn turd Naraku! Oh I'm so mad at him! How dare you do this to Kagome! Ooooh what will happen now!?
(Chapter 19) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Oh wow! This was really good angst! Poor foolish Kagome. Everything she worked for is under siege. It's going to be a hard row to hoe for her. Yikes! I partially blame Sesshoumaru for bringing her to Onigumo's attention. The Spider doesn't follow anyone's orders. It could look like Sesshoumaru set her up with Naraku. Or even Kouga! This could threaten her parenting status with her child. Everything. I bet he took nude pictures of her and is using them.
This was really a good update. Fantastic! It has me thinking :-)
this last chapter brought a lot of disappointment. I can see where you're heading with it especially with kagome signing over 60% of the shares and then possibly naraku having incriminating photos of her naked or videos. But I just feel like with the flow of the story and how Kaede appointed Kagome as CEO then she'd be smarter than this. I'm not sure if I'd continue reading until this story is finished.
Wow I love this story! It has the right amount of tension, humor and anticipation. I like how you captured Sesshomaru's character, except for the last chapter. He seems way too understanding and Compassionate, almost makes me wonder if he had a hand in any of it. OMG, the whole concept of getting drugged with no memory is so scary to begin with. Kagome really did blunder this time, even though all her friends and even the stoic Sesshomaru warned her about Naraku, she still fell for it. And if Sesshomaru found her naked, then that means pictures for blackmail are coming next. I really hope she can dig her way out if this. I feel really bad for her character, but that's what makes a good story. It can't all be flowers and unicorns! Love it. Please update soon.
I have really enjoyed your story up until last chapter, I'm going to try and continue to read it, but I'm very dissapoineed with how the party went. If she hadn't had so many warnings about Naraku, including from his wife, and the fact that Sessh took away her wine, for an obvious reason (I'm sorry, it would be pretty clear to anyone if their drink was taken away at a party it shouldn't be trusted), I could see her doing something dumb around him, but the fact that she went privately around his house including the bedrooms, which I don't see any business tycoon showing his guests his bedrooms, with all those warnings, why would she even go off alone with him. I know she's not some super genious but she was smart enough to be appointed to a CEO position. It's just way to ridiculous in my mind. But I do hope that your story doesn't stay down this path for to long, it was so very nice until she became a complete idiot.
(Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Mar 2017
My goodness I don't think I've ever been so stressed out over a fic. Please update soon so I can see how shes going to get out of this mess.
(Chapter 19) - Sat 18 Mar 2017
Well i am disappointed and sad.... And the whole chapter was so damn confusing. I get that you wanted to depict kagome's confusion but it left a bad taste......I see no light at the end...And it's so hard reading when it's like this....Thx for updating! Will eagerly wait for more even if it's depressing! Hope to see some light soon!
(Chapter 19) - Sat 18 Mar 2017
Okay now this is getting good. I need the updatr asap please.
(Chapter 13) - Sun 12 Mar 2017
This is such a great story! It's very well written and thought out. I appreciate the subtle build up of Sessomaru and Kagome's relationship. So many authors just throw them into a relationship, but you took your time with it and it's very refreshing. I hope you update this story soon!(:
I'm a little behind on the story but I had to thank you for both making Kagome's character they way you did and explaining why. I feel like like a breath of fresh air that she is neither too confident nor perfect at everything. I appreciate that she has to work so hard to reach her goals. Tbh JK kinda bored of the stories where she's too timid to try to get what she wants and she's more or less dragged across the finish line and praised for it. This way Kagome's accomplishments and victories (no matter how small) are that much more appealing. Long story short, keep it up! I love reading your work!
(Chapter 18) - Tue 07 Mar 2017
can't wait till the next chapter
(Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Mar 2017
It's good to know that Kagome's not being portrayed as a genius business woman and I just really like how she has her faults and is learning from her mistakes but ugh this chapter made me frustrated haha coz i mean inu and kouga already warned her about naraku and even kagura warned her! But she still wasn't wary enough of naraku and now she ended up drugged -.-" >_< hopefully sess can get to her in time and i really hope she'll learn to be more cautious next time.
I fell like Kagome would be more cautious after getting Koga's warninf especially because recently she has been proven wrong (by Sesshomaru) about the business world and her own business. But besides that, I love your story! Hope you update more.
Gr8 story so far!!! I understand how you are trying to show Kagome as a more real person with her being a bit naive, having her faults and finding her way though the corporate world which is new to her. Her detremination remains true to her character but i don't like how despite getting repeated warnings she walks right into Naraku's trap! She seems stupid there to not heed to all those warnings and getting carried away so easily by Naruku despite her wish to not attract attention in the 1st place! I understand that this has to happen to steer the story in the direction of bringing Kagome and Sesshomaru closer, but Kagome just seems plain ignorant here. I still love everything else!!! So plzzz update soon!!!
(Chapter 16) - Sun 05 Mar 2017
As of right now I really don't know how to feel about this story. I agree with other people kagome is coming across negative and sesshomaro too harsh. You need to start to change the dynamics of your story because it's a weird setting for a couple now. Looking forward to the next chapter.
(Chapter 18) - Sun 05 Mar 2017
I really enjoy the story line you have going and I like that Kagome is flawed and realzing her mistakes and fixing them. However, I dont like that she didn't heed the multiple warnings against Naraku. I think she is smarter than that. I like Sesshomaru in these chapters as he's warming up to Kagome and such a good dad!! I cannot wait until the next chapter! Update soon please (:
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