Reviews for Kami why me by candy

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Cheyanna (Chapter 10) - Mon 28 May 2018

Looking forward to more!!! 


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Mon 28 May 2018

Loving this story.


Ryo chan (Chapter 10) - Mon 28 May 2018

This should be interesting, can't wait to see what awaits kagome and hope they manage to get Rins dress done 


Mei Lee (Chapter 10) - Mon 28 May 2018

Excited for the next chapter! Thank you for the update ????


Alesia (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 May 2018

I hope you get better


Ryo chan (Chapter 9) - Sun 27 May 2018

I'm loving this so far, sometimes is seems rushed but I like how portrayed kagome. Also I can't even imagine what your going through you are amazing kick cancer ass 


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Mar 2018

I I like the story.  I look forward to reading more.


Alesia (Chapter 8) - Mon 11 Dec 2017

I hope you continue 


Tiana+Love (Chapter 5) - Sat 22 Oct 2016

Love it! Keep up the updates I can't wait to see what happens next ;)


Tiana+Love (Chapter 5) - Sat 22 Oct 2016

MythMagykFae (Chapter 8) - Fri 21 Oct 2016

Good luck and work hard! Nice chapter (:


Lori Britt (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Oct 2016

Wondeful story so far. I have read the reviews and have to agree with many I have read regarding grammar. Otherwise the story is easy to follow and the premise is great. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more about Sess and Kagome.


Saiya (Chapter 8) - Thu 20 Oct 2016

Epic!!!!! La Sad that there Aren't anymore until Christmas. I Hope Life is Treating you Well. Have a Great Two and a Half Months.


Saiya (Chapter 6) - Thu 20 Oct 2016

Hehehehe Rin is Adorable!


Saiya (Chapter 7) - Thu 20 Oct 2016

They are So Cute


LittleRin (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Oct 2016

Okay.  I understand that you are uncomfortable with the word saw. I'm guessing probably an association with the movies. I had a friend who reacted similarly years ago. 

There are grammatically correct alternatives:

 I have seen

He has seen

 You have seen

What she had seen

 


ScarletPegasi (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Oct 2016

This story really has a lot of potential, but personally grammar mistakes ruins the flow for me.

 

I will continue reading because it is intriguing, though I do suggest you get a beta that can proofread for you, so that you avoid grammar mistakes, and one who can also maybe give some tips on the structure of your storytelling :3

 

Good luck on further chapters!


Mona (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Oct 2016

Great but there was some spelling errors.


Alashia (Chapter 7) - Tue 18 Oct 2016

Too funny on Kagome's reaction every time they kiss! I can tell things are definitely going to get heated up real soon. Keep it coming!

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Tue 18 Oct 2016

Yummy. Nice chapter. I Liked it. Especially the kiss scene. Nice writing job. Will be looking for more chapters and I can't wait for the mating scene. lol


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