Wow comunication issues! I love the bond between Rin and Kagome!

excellent! please update again soon

I actually don't see why she reacted that way.  One, he's a demon.  Two, in the modern world you receive a ring so that others know you're taken. It's then understood that it wouldn't be appropriate for you to date someone else.  Three, she's thinking about this in kind of an immature way. She should know about how sex works no matter how embarrassed you get.  Especially for someone who was thinking that she's a woman, wanting a family and how dismal her prospects for marriage are.  I know she wants love and everything, but she's in the feudal era where her options are like Sesshoumaru or Sesshoumaru.  But hey, those aren't bad options! :)

I read your first post of this story and really don't see much of a difference except the grammar needs a little work but it does not detract from the story that much. I still love the story and I look forward to your future updates. Just keep it going and write for yourself. Good job.

Oh dear. .. her temper and his possessive expectations  is something they probably should have discussed first.  *giggle * love it.

I am tuning out the improper use of some of the grammer,  but I have to say your logic is slightly flawed regarding 'saw'. That's like saying you won't use the word 'meat' because you're a vegetarian,  but will use 'meet' even if it ruins the structure and meaning of your sentence. 

This story has potential...

It'll be interesting to see them try and figure each other out, his reactions to her future mind and distincly Kagome traits are sure to be entertaining. I look forward to more!

I love it! Hope you update soon.

Endin on a Cliffy.

I have the feeling I have read this before, but on another note, another reviewer has commented on grammar, which I agree with, but I will add tense, (eg, past, present, and, future.)  and phrasing as well

"Here you go. Lunches served."

"Here you go , lunch is served."

Basic typos are easy to clean up if you read through your work before you post

even though I may have read something similar before I enjoy the story line

Molto bello alla prossima. 

excellent

Interesting, at least Kagome has a backbone and knows how to stand up to Sesshoumaru.

I like this story and can't wait to see what else happens.  What the hell was up with the anomynous reviewer posting two long chapters on this review page? That sucked.

I know Sessho and Kagome will eventually fall in love in due time but just not right now. lol

I really like it so far. Can't wait for an update. 

I love ur story so far, its amazing ^°^

pls continue ur work

This story has great potential but your chapters are entirely too short...