Che bella famiglia ma senza Inuyasha, non vedo l'ora per il prossimo capitolo bellissimo.
query: "How did you like the chapter?"
response: I liked the chapter.
Query: Question...?
Response: You set several movements and questions into the chapter, quite well I believe and there was also a nice blend of talk and action. Yet I must reread the entire story for pace, I kept losing it in this chapter.
Oh my goodness. I laughed so hard when I read about Inupapa being from heaven and let out a few wtfs. Good times. Can't wait for more!
Come on inuyasha screw up! And Sesshoumaru start making some moves ugh .....more chapters please and longer ones to ....I want moreeeeeee
Leticia (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Oct 2016
I'm really enjoying this story and I like how you incorporate everyones growth, whether physically or emotionally. I can't wait for the next update
I like the story so far, but I'm honestly getting impatient and want to see kag/sess's love story.
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Mona (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Oct 2016
Excellent chapter, I hope when Inuyasha does mess up Kagome becomes a wandering Miko and keeps the company of Katai while he ventures out on his own. Even if it's not custom or standard in demon society, she's stubborn.
Marie (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Oct 2016
It's a good crappie, im anxious with this mess up he has kids by another woman I tell you. Or he's been handing out favors for free. What ever it is, I hope it's in the next chapter
candy (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Oct 2016
I like it but is sesshomaru falling for her
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