This is definitely an interesting read. Very unique. But for me it's too hard. I get lost in new species and new words.... I apologize, it is really interesting, but at times I get confused. Like what? So maybe have a glosary of only the words and terms you use in specific chapter? Like the words we encounter only those since it gets confusing to scroll till you find the needed word. If there is xantar in that chapter. Put xantar and not the wolf pack who is in the next chapter. Just a suggestion. It's only my opinion ok? Not necessarily true.
It's a great talent to write such science and fiction work and I admire people like you. I would never could write anything even similar. Magic history yes. Like you? Never.
I thank you for updating. Despite having those difficult times in your life. Please stay strong, I know it's not easy... But hopefully you will get better. Step by step.
Take care of yourself.
Toni (Chapter 20) - Fri 30 Mar 2018
really enjoying this sorry so sorry for your loss
looking forward to many more chapers
Not really a review other than the fact thats its March 19th (2018) now and the story is at March 19th (4035) too!! Hahahaa had to say that :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
P.S. had to 'edit' my 'non-review' LOL
Not really a review other than the fact thats its March 19th (2018) now!! Hahahaa had to say that :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Hey! I really like your story I am hoping you would Please Update Again Soon!!!
dotti (Chapter 19) - Tue 20 Feb 2018
Epic!!! So glad your back!!
iin (Chapter 19) - Sat 17 Feb 2018
What's it Toga want? What a man, he really does not or refused to know but his sons self conflict. Thanks for update ????
Love love love this story
I am a new reader to your story and I have to say, this has been one of the best fanfics I have read in months - no exaggeration!
The way you've written this universe and adapt Kagome and Sesshomaru's characters to this reality has been such a great read. I started reading this just last night and when I saw the update, I was so excited to read more! From Sesshomaru's cut-throat empire to Kagome's lost yet very intriguing past, everything has been laid out beautifully and I cannot say enough how thrilled I am to see this type of a story between these two characters. It never feels over the top or too "convenient" that some piece of technology is able to do something; everything is incredibly thought out and you should be very proud of your work. Also, while the sweatiness between the two was short-lived (but still incredibly hot!), I must say I am excited to revisit the smut as you put *wink wink* in the next chapter. That physical connection between the two has definitely added another layer to their unique bond and of course, its just hot to read!
All in all, fantastic story and I am so curious and excited to see where this story goes. I think I got lucky I found this story just as you updated cause now I am hooked!! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
P.S. I can't help but be reminded of Blade Runner when I read this; any inspiration from there?
Loved it! You’re brilliant! i seriously felt goosebumps on my own arms reading about Inuyasha’s experience listening to those tapes!
Can’t wait to read more!!!! Thanks for the update!!:)
That' a cruel cliffhanger. Especially since I'm in between books right now. I was so looking forward to seeing maybe a sexy scene between the two of them. I can't wait to see how sesshoumaru reacts to his dad telling him he probably has to get married and find a kiyoshi. Or take over the business from home.
Anyways like always I'm at the edge of my couch awaiting your updates. Cheers.
Tio
Kanda (Chapter 18) - Sat 10 Feb 2018
hell yeh, we all came out! this story is too good to be true! i love it! i love you fer coming out with it! and now that i know you have a naruto fanfic, too, im bout to get my ass in gear and go read it. you walking with me in my favorite places, fam. keep up the good work, can’t wait fer the next chapter!! x3
Kanda (Chapter 17) - Sat 10 Feb 2018
i’m a new reader! and i’ll admit, i didn’t expect much from this story. there have been many stories i’ve read that try to use words that aren’t native to the tongue we speak, but not many has been as successful as you have been! i’m just here wondering where the hell all these terms came from and if you’d watched a lot star trek in yer time or stargate sg-1. or any other space tv show that’s out there. it’s very interesting! and yer right, sesshoumaru is an asshole, but that’s normal for him anyway and even though i’m ready for the romance to commence, i also like the slow burn as well. keep it up! love the world and plot you’ve built, can’t wait to see if kagome is a homunculus and what that means. i’m also sorry for the depression you went through. i go through the same thing and it’s not easy. not at all. it can happen at any time and sometimes it makes it impossible fer me to write, too, because i feel like i’m not doing as well as other writers out there and it makes me really sad. even now, i’m jealous of yer writing. even though i know authors struggle as much as i do, you guys seem to write yer chapters so seamlessly, haha. have a good day, and i hope you recover much more from yer depression. :)
Saraniya (Chapter 18) - Fri 09 Feb 2018
seriously! Your attention to details is amazing!!!
Susy V (Chapter 18) - Fri 09 Feb 2018
Ugh, the world you build with your words is super awesome! Loving the feel of it.
Drifty (Chapter 18) - Thu 08 Feb 2018
Awesome update! I can't wait to see what happens on this new planet! Please update again soon! I'm excited for more!
It was boring. But it gave more insight into the story. I look forward to the next chapter. The writing style and plot line are in sync. You are doing great.
Anonymous (Chapter 17) - Wed 07 Feb 2018
Welcome back welcome back weeelllcccooommeee baaaaaccckkk
I do find your story to be interesting and curious . I would hope that you do continue your story.
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