I can understand kagome hesitancy...well feel insecurity as long as their life...new place & new hope...
(reviewed this over at AO3, but decided to leave one here too, since this is my favorite site)
I kept skipping over this story, but finally decided to read the reviews and see what it said~ I saw ChaoticReverie's review, and also being a fan of theirs, decided to give your story a try and I read all 12 chapters at once! It's a great read! You're very talented and have obviously put a lot of hard work behind crafting this whole new universe. I'll definitely be watching for more!
Emiko (Chapter 12) - Sun 04 Sep 2016
Still here and still think this story is amazing!! I look forward to more . . . mainly because I miss Sesshy soooo much! ;D Bring back the fluff!!! =P
<3 L
Halcali (Chapter 12) - Fri 02 Sep 2016
Okay, my mind is officially blown. Inuyasha is me after reading this chapter. So she is like the meidou stone, but instead of being a portal to hell, she is able to open a portal to different dimensions. Wow. I'm used to reading fics where Kagome merges with the shikon no tama or being a personified shikon but being sorta somewhat like a meidou in human form is something else. Great job!
Scared for Kagome though. Your Sesshoumaru seems pretty Machiavellian and I can see him using Kagome for selfish means. But I love how you portrayed him, don't worry.
Can't wait for the next update!
iin (Chapter 12) - Thu 01 Sep 2016
Has kagome made to be such a mind controller to open another dimensions? maybe to assaulted and colonized others...
a very letal weapon, so dangerous...scary....but interesting....hem...
Great story. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Jenna (Chapter 12) - Thu 01 Sep 2016
....... Wow!!!
Kagome's past is getting more complex by the chapter! Every little clue opens the gate for more questions. Her mother knew but didn't tell her, or is 5 just toying with her or trying to find out what kagome knows? What were the experiments? Who's all involved? You are doing an amazing job at keeping you readers wanting more. If this was finished I would read it in one sitiing, it's that good.
Poor Plynus! At less he's not dead ^^
Ohhhh! She released cuei!
Hmmmm, can't wait to find out what inuyasha finds out.
erika (Chapter 11) - Mon 29 Aug 2016
Keep up the great work im always looking forward to seeing an update from this story!!! Can never get enough of this story!!! All the best
iin (Chapter 11) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
Kagome's family kinda liked prisoners cause they're had a remarkable ability...dunk...dunk...thank 4 update
Jenna (Chapter 11) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
OMG!!!
First off I adore Plynus. He's such a sweetheart ^^
Ohhh android?! I wonder if facial expression is all it can do that's new to kagome.
Hmmm. Kagome home sounds more like a prison that's runned by a mad scientist! Or Naraku???
To me length doesn't matter, it's the contents that does.
I'm sorry, I hope things are are getting better!
Mona (Chapter 11) - Fri 26 Aug 2016
Aww come on... How are you going to leave us hanging, anyway I hope you update again soon.
Susy V (Chapter 11) - Thu 25 Aug 2016
Noooo! I want to see what happens next!
Wow! Science fiction setting! That should be a genre here! Genuinely interested as to where this story is leading. Stop caring about the flames and just write!
Still in love with your story! Impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Let so update lol please!
Halcali (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Aug 2016
Lovely chapter. Kagome's background is so intriguing and the way you describe her trance-like state is so vivid and beautiful. I can't wait to find out more about her past. Looking forward to the next!
Jenna (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Aug 2016
Yay, new chapter!!!
several planes of existence!!! This story just got more interesting and complicated. You can play around with so many different ideas now ^^
I like the fact that kagome doesn't know exactly what cuei is, this way the reader learns as she learns.
Love the info about Sesshomaru and his race. Lol, inuasha :D
This chapter made my day. Work was stressful and over all awful. All I wanted to do was curl up and go to sleep, but I saw that I had an email. It was a notification about is chapter. It brighten up my whole day! Thank you so much for writing. You're truly amazing ^^
iin (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Aug 2016
inuyasha's seen in chapter...oh a best hacker?....i'm waiting the progress tracker....
kagome background is more attractive & mysterious than sesshy...hem...hem..
Is she kinda priestess? or similar like that?..
barb (Chapter 10) - Wed 17 Aug 2016
It makes me wonder....even if he does find out what he wants about kagome....whats he gonna do about it?
Experiment on her? See her as some threat to the universe and destroy her?
Keep her for himself because....only the best for him?
Ree-san (Chapter 10) - Wed 17 Aug 2016
Wonderful chapter as always.
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