Fantastic re-write! Attention to detail as well as just the image you paint is just mind-blowing!

Im really looking forward to seeing where this narrative goes :)

Can't wait to read the next installment :D 

Love the rewrite of the scene! Very well written and the description you put in paid off much better for their first time. It felt more primal than just a moment, like she needed this more than him which makes me more interested in Kagome's origin. 

I know it's been a while but always looking foward to your story updates :) - Cold is still one of my fav stories on here <3 

Hoping to see more from you soon :D 

Hey there! I've been following your story since forever, and I love the way the story is progressing. Even if life is getting in the way of pumping out new chapters, just know that the quality is still there and I can say I still get really excited to see an update :0)

I'm pumped to see Sango introduced!!!! I can't wait to see how Kagome and her interact later one... and to hopefully see some form of friendship bloom.

Keep up the good work!

Thank you very much for updating!

Its only your story that keeps me returning to dokuga, wondering if your story has been updating!

I look forward to the next chapter!

I AM SO HAPPY YOU RE BACK IN ACCCTTTIIIOOONNNNNN :D

I love love love your writing and this story line is just DA BEST. This could 100% be a movie. It is in my head anyways. Thank you for this new chapter and good luck in your search for a new job!

This story is wonderful so far! I am growing to like it as much as angel (which i hope you will update soon). I must say Sesshoumaru's last name reminded me of Warframe (not sure if you know of the game) and made me giggle. Keep up the amazing work - your talent as a writer is phenomenal! 

Yey! New chapter! And Sango and Kirara! Can't wait for the next one!

This is a wonderful story and I was Hoping that you would be Updating it soon. 

Yay update ????????????

Firstly, i am sorry for your loss. I wish there was more that I could say or do but I am always empty when this happens. May his memory not be forgotten and live long and strong. May those who caused him harm be punished for their crimes. May you breathe easier each passing day.

Secondly, I really enjoyed this chapter. The development, the descriptions, oo la la, the sex. I keep expecting Kagome to try the blunt or whatever Sesshomaru is into haha. I really enjoy how you keep them true to their characters, and don't warp them to suit your story. I enjoy the details given in small morsels and only some puzzle pieces dolled out. 

Again,

I am sorry for your loss. I understand you waiting to write. In your time, darling. As you can. 

Thank you,.

Thank you for continuing to write while undergoing such a difficult time.

You did a fabulous job with this chapter! As much as I anticipate the next installment, please take the time you need to honor your brother's memory.

Wonderful story. Just started reading yestetday and now im hooked. Cant wait for the next chapter.

This was sooooo good.  I really enjoy the sci-fi environment that you bring to life. It makes me think of Dune and Farscape to name a few.  Look forward to future installments.  Also, my condolences to you and your family.  I hope you are able to get the vindication for your brother so that you can have some sort of closure. 

I love this story. So happy when I saw your updates. My condolences to you and your family on the loss of your brother.

Well damn.  I definitely got my steamy scene. Hot damn LOL. I'm interested to see the budding romance in the next chapter but I'm a sucker for good ol fashioned lovers  drama! 

 Now on a more serious note.

   Im sorry about your brother.  That is a terrible thing to happen to you and your family and I hope he gets the justice he deserves.   And dont mind us over here when may comes around. Just take care of you and yours. Be with your family and remember  the good in his life. 

 Best regards and fondest wished 

 Tio

I really love your story as it moves on I've seen more details in the lasts then the beginning which I love your chaptes are beginning to become a extension of the chapters before it.  I really looking forward to the next one 

I love the use of integrated technology. I'm a big fan of Ghost in the Shell. I did notice a few places where you forgot a wlor or two that completed a sentence. I'm intrigued and looking forward to reading more. Cheers!

This was very different. I like the alien world you have created. I don't believe that I have seen an off world SessKags fic. Great so far! Cheers!

I am so sorry for your loss! Keep up the fantastic work and definitely take ur time. You are an awesome writer.

Y'know, before I wasn't really interested in the story and wanted more smut.

Now the story is so interesting I skim over the smut to reach the story.

Thank you for building such an amazing universe. I'm very into this story and I hope you can create more chapters soon.

Also, I lost my mother last May, I offer my condolences to you. It is never easy to lose family. I hope you have someone to be with you, it's not good to be alone at such times. I speak from experience.

=3 Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! o/