Hahaha, I'm sure Kaede loves every moment with the crazy family Kagome brought about though to old or not. (:
Wonderful story thus far, I look forward to more!
lonny (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016
This is really good!! Hope you'll update soon:-)!!!
Violla (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016
Bellissimo spero che aggiorna presto il prossimo capitolo.
chapter 6 is difficult to read because the paragraphs need to be broken up. Please fix
Also, maybe you should work on your spacing, because it is sometimes difficult to follow who is speaking. Since the transitions occur quickly you could include a few dialogues by one character and then in a new line by the next character. I know its alot of work but then the presentation would be as gr8 as the plot!
Oh I like where this is going!!!! Gr8 chapters! Will wait for the next ones! :D
I like the way this story is coming along. Though I do have one recommendation.
Generally you start a new paragraph anytime there's a change in scene, or a change in who is speaking. This way you'll avoid walls of words. Just a thought.
Good chap
Just found this story and am throughly enjoying it. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Jaz (Chapter 4) - Wed 20 Jul 2016
I believe you meant to write, This is the same scent as the Miko's well.
Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016
Please update again soon.
Trouble never far
Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016
I love the story already. I can't wait for the next installment.
I love this story really fun and interesting. Looking forward to seeing more.
Well I just stumbled onto this story and I love it to pieces! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!
Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jul 2016
Good story. I'm very interested to see where this goes.
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