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Jean (Chapter 7) - Mon 03 Oct 2016

I am loving this story so far! Chapter 6bwas so sad, but gave great background to your character. I can't wait to see what happens in Kagome's time and how the demons handle the sounds and smell :)


inuGoddess (Chapter 7) - Sat 01 Oct 2016

OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 6) - Fri 02 Sep 2016

Hahaha, I'm sure Kaede loves every moment with the crazy family Kagome brought about though to old or not. (:

Wonderful story thus far, I look forward to more!


lonny (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016

This is really good!! Hope you'll update soon:-)!!!


Violla (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016

Bellissimo spero che aggiorna presto il prossimo  capitolo. 


kiyone110 (Chapter 6) - Wed 31 Aug 2016

chapter 6 is difficult to read because the paragraphs need to be broken up. Please fix


Inudemoness (Chapter 6) - Wed 31 Aug 2016

Also, maybe you should work on your spacing, because it is sometimes difficult to follow who is speaking. Since the transitions occur quickly you could include a few dialogues by one character and then in a new line by the next character. I know its alot of work but then the presentation would be as gr8 as the plot!


Inudemoness (Chapter 6) - Wed 31 Aug 2016

Oh I like where this is going!!!! Gr8 chapters! Will wait for the next ones! :D


KEdakumi (Chapter 6) - Wed 31 Aug 2016

I like the way this story is coming along. Though I do have one recommendation. 

 

Generally you start a new paragraph anytime there's a change in scene, or a change  in who is speaking. This way you'll avoid walls of words. Just a thought.


roberta. (Chapter 5) - Tue 23 Aug 2016

Good chap


KEdakumi (Chapter 4) - Thu 21 Jul 2016

Just found this story and am throughly enjoying it.  Can't wait to see where you take it.


Jaz (Chapter 4) - Wed 20 Jul 2016

I believe you meant to write, This is the same scent as the Miko's well.


Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016

Please update again soon.


roberta. (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016

Trouble never far


Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016

I love the story already. I can't wait for the next installment.


roberta. (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Jul 2016

I love this story really fun and interesting. Looking forward to seeing more.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 Jul 2016

Well I just stumbled onto this story and I love it to pieces! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!


Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jul 2016

Good story. I'm very interested to see where this goes.


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