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VS (Chapter 29) - Wed 19 Sep 2018


I kind of lost track of this story and just catched up by rereading the whole thing. And I have to say it was worth the time! This is such an interesting piece of work! I LOVE your OC's Nurial and Raya and I totally envy the relationship they have! Such a sweet couple.

I'm glad Dragon Blood finally died ... gosh he was even more of a pest than Naraku - and that says a lot! Though I'm glad he wounded Sesshoumaru. Otherwise he wouldn't find the "opportunity" to finally apologise. He really was a jerk!

So Inuyasha died? I'm curious to see whether Sesshoumaru will make it in time or not. And you still haven't told us about the other two wishes! When will Kouga give her Midoriko's letters? ... So many questions I have :)

All in all an interesting story! And I'm looking forward to your next update!

Eryn (Chapter 29) - Sun 02 Sep 2018

Not sure what happened with the formatting, but its appearing as one giant paragraph.


Dryft (Chapter 25) - Tue 03 Apr 2018

this is getting to be quite interesting!!! Love the story

Jen (Chapter 5) - Sun 01 Apr 2018

Your formatting seems to have broken, it was hard to read the story when the paragraph were all run together.

REDWOLF (Chapter 25) - Sat 24 Mar 2018

This was a fantastic update :)

REDWOLF (Chapter 24) - Tue 20 Feb 2018

Ohhhh....Midoriko is such a good fighter :)  Good chapter :D

KyraTekak (Chapter 3) - Sun 18 Feb 2018

Awesome story

MythMagykFae (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Oct 2017

Also CONGRATULATIONS! Good luck, take your time to write, and enjoy your family time, again congrats on the baby!

MythMagykFae (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Oct 2017

Wonderful chapter, I cant wait for more! The interaction and detail put into InuYasha's confrontation of Sesshomaru was really enjoyable to read!

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Oct 2017

Congratulations on the birth of your baby!!! I hope you did not have too much of a hard time birthing your son. Now that the easy part is over. the fun part begins in raising him (and any future kids if this is your first) along with the many trials and tribulations. The fun part is watching them grow and helping them down the path to adulthood, that is the fun and enjoyable part. 

Now to my review of this current chapter. This chapter seemed like more of a filler because not too much happened except Inuyasha being Inuyasha with his confrontation with Sessho concerning Kagome's where abouts. Kagome seems to be getting stronger both physically and emotionally with Midoriko's help. By the time she meets back up with Sessho, she will most likely forgive Sessho (after he does a little begging and groveling in his own prideful and dignified way, after all he does have an image to and then they can move on to re-establishing their relationship.

I always wondered why Nuriel and Raya never had any children, so now we know and they will finally try to have those children, after the war that is coming.

Nicely written chpater. Looking forward to new updates during your spare time after all family and RL comes first. Nice job!

Thanks for updating and cheers to baby's first month old. :)

Natalia (Chapter 21) - Thu 03 Aug 2017

Ah good luck with your everything! Lol take care of yourself! And write at your own pacing! We will wait!

Take care!

REDWOLF (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Aug 2017

The poem is beautiful :)  It made me cry. however, it was a nice blessing :)

MythMagykFae (Chapter 20) - Fri 23 Jun 2017

Go Midoriko with the heart to heart! I look forward to more! (:

Natalia (Chapter 20) - Fri 23 Jun 2017

A good chapter!  I can see your improvement in writing and plot! It was a touching chapter and the drama made Mt heart ache! Thx for updating! 

MythMagykFae (Chapter 19) - Mon 05 Jun 2017

Sesshomaru you fool, are you a child! Lashing out like that...

Poor Kagome. I love that the legend she loved was about her all along and that Midoriko is helping her!

Great Chapter!

Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 18) - Tue 18 Apr 2017 sesshomaru what have you done?i wonder where the kibo tree and kagome had she gonna be gone forever? I hope sesshomaru will realized that she was gone and how fool he really was..i hope she is not beyond his reach well I'll just wait for your next update to answer these questions...XD thank you for the updated! xoxo

Miss C (Chapter 18) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

OMG!! I can't wait till the next chapter!

MythMagykFae (Chapter 18) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Wow, what a beautifully sad tale... and it seems to be a legend based off of her no less! I hope Sess gets some sense knocked into him. Poor Kagome.

Wonderful chapter, I can not wait for the next!

Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 17) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Whoa what a great update! I wonder why mrs.higurashi gaves their letters for kagome to sesshomaru instead of handing it directly to kagome? I missed the way sesshomaru flirting with kagome i hope you could write more of that scene...while nuriel and raya in the background teasing the two and at the same time helping  the two  to find their way to each other. 

And oh the bastard is still alive?! Maybe plotting another evil plans..

Goodluck for the next update!

Thank you for updating! Takecare always! Xoxo

MythMagykFae (Chapter 17) - Tue 14 Mar 2017

Damn it, they're right. It was just a clone...

Wonderful chapter, the kids are so cute!

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