absolutely loved it! i was sad when it ended tho..... i wanted more! haha
Whoah! I haved read all the chapters from top to the last before i come to review this fic what i can i say is that i am glad that i have crossed to this story or else i would never known having fun while reading this story. I don't know if this is your first fic you've written though there were mistakes but it's just minimal and tolerable but i hope you would reread the chapters again and correct those mistakes such as the spellings, font size and their alignments this is for the benefits of your future reader's and to everyone who would gonna reread your story. I love your story! I like your idea! You're a good writer! I enjoyed the story so much! This fic should be label as one of my many favorites. You did great! Thus i am now excited to your next update!
But before i forget, Congratulations to you and to your husband you have been blessed a precious gift from God.
Don't stress yourself ok takecare! Thank you for giving us reading pleasures! Godbless xoxo
What a bittersweet chapter! Her family trying to make it easier on her, even as thier own hearts are breaking... just wonderful work, I can't wait for more!
(Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Feb 2017
Congratulations!!!! May God bless you and your growing family. I hope you have a safe and easy pregnancy, labor, and delivery. And thanks for the story update. Give a shout if you need some occassional encouragement.
Congrats on the upcoming parenthood. :)
thoroughly enjoying the story. Can't wait to see how it goes.
i can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!
I'm super proud of that kid! What a good thing to do, and proctecting his sister too! Nice xhapter. (:
(Chapter 14) - Tue 20 Dec 2016
So far an awesome story! Can't wait for more updates!
Wonderful Chapter, I look forward to the next!
(Chapter 13) - Mon 05 Dec 2016
Sess turns to Kagome "something's not quite right."
Looking at the demons "an illusion, what are you hiding!"
Sorry been playing to much warcraft and that is all I could think during that scene :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
How interesting, I look forward to more!
(Chapter 12) - Mon 07 Nov 2016
Great chapter! I'm glad they were able to defeat him with out him splitting to many times. There were a lot of typos in this one though. I can't wait to see what happens with Sess and Kags relationship, looking forward to the next chapter!
The hell did they do to him! Did Nuriel scar his eye, steal his throne, what!? Great update!
Who has Raya and why?? This is a suspenseful story! I love the interactions and growing emotions with Sesshomaru and Kagome!
(Chapter 9) - Fri 21 Oct 2016
I'm so happy Rays isn't in a jail or lab somewhere. It will be hard enough for Sesshoumaru to get over himself to accept a relationship with Kagome.
YAY! Raya's POV was interesting to see and that scene about his proposal was touching! (: I look forward to more.
(Chapter 9) - Tue 18 Oct 2016
She seems like a lovely, caring person. I wonder what the stone is for? Can't wait for more!
(Chapter 8) - Fri 14 Oct 2016
So funny seeing them in modern time. I expected one of them to be asking more questions though. Can't wait to see how their next excursion into the city goes.
LOL culture shock.
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