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Mona (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

I still hope Kagome leaves or files for divorce.  She needs to get to know the real Sesshoumaru not the one who tries to hard because of his unfaithful mistake.  She needs to cut ties with him and maybe they can start anew as friends and co parents, see where that will get them.


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

This was a well written good angtsy chapter. I enjoyed reading it, well of course I enjoy the whole story so far. Like I said in a previous review, Sessho should have told Kagome what he did at the beginning of their relationship and Kagome might have been in a forgiving mood then but not so much now.

No one has asked Seesho how does he know it is really his kid. He has not even thought about himself, he knew that Kagura was still sleeping with Naraku at the time. He even called Kagura while Sessho was still sitting on the side of her bed and they were talking like lovers. Was he that dense and stupid that he couldn't put two and two together.I'm talking about Sessho here. If Kagome ever decides to take him back it will a very long time before she ever trusts him again and the dynamics of their relationship will never be the same again either.

Greatjob. Looking forward to more updates soon.


Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Sun 14 Aug 2016

Debra (Chapter 8) - Tue 09 Aug 2016

This is the first time I've read your story, and it's really good. While I honestly question how reliable a paternity test could be without Sesshoumaru's involvement, the damage is done. The fact that Kagura chose to go to his house during the day when he would most likely be at work proves she did it to hurt Kagome. I can also see where you say this story may not have a happy ending. For anyone having a cheating boyfriend or husband it is heartbreaking, but if the kid is actually his it will be doubly so. I can't imagine the pain of seeing the constant reminder that your husband cheated on you. Then to know that the whore was the one who gave him a kid first. Poor Kagome! I do see her as strong woman though. I can easily imagine her riding over to somewhere, maybe Kikyo's place. I can also see her filing for divorce papers rather quickly. I also loved that you had him know about the baby because it will hurt him more knowing he is missing out on everything he wanted. Especially if he finds out this kid was Naraku's or someone else's and she just went after him for the money or whatever.

Maybe now she will get to go to school like she wanted become more independent. Make a name for her self, and meet someone else. If she ever takes him back it would probably be a long time. Something like this doesn't get worked out in days or even months if ever, maybe years.

Anyway I look forward to your next chapter.


ladyhikikomori (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Aug 2016

I have to agree that I don't think it is Sesshomaru's child. Kagura waits nine years and then decides that now is the time to let him know he has a kid? Doesn't really make sense, especially when you add up the other pieces. I can't blame Kagome for her reaction and again, I agree with other reviewers that I hope Kagome doesn't just fall back into his arms at the drop of a hat. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 8) - Tue 09 Aug 2016

Hmm, I don't think that Kagura's child is Sessho's kid. I believe it is Naraku's. The child has black hair and red eyes. It doesn't sound like he has no features of Sessho. Sessho has strong features that at least something of him would show through. I re-read chapter two and didn't he say that they fucked most of the night and he still couldn't get a release and neither could she. I know it doesn't take much for a woman to get pregnant but it sounded like she wanted to set Sessho up for some reason. Maybe she was already pregnant with Naraku's and he rejected her so she had to blame someone. How could she get a paternity test without a sample from Sessho and I believe he didn't give anything, so where did she get it?

Great chapter. Kagome did exactly what I would have done. Go beserk and then run off. Hope she is okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Mona (Chapter 8) - Mon 08 Aug 2016

i hope they do not find her and Kagome is safe somewhere with a new identity.  Why should Sesshoumaru have all the fun and get a happy result.  I hate it when people have Sesshoumaru do what he wants and gets away with it easily while Kagome just falls back into his hands without a fight or not experiencing something without him in her life.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2016

Oh-oh now the shit will hit the fan in short time. Now that Sessho has what he always wanted, a baby, he stands a chance of losing it all. I feel sorry for him now. Looking forward to reading more soon. Just love this story. Great job.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Sun 10 Jul 2016

I liked this chapter and that Touga got what was coming to him. The mistake that Sessho made while dating Kagome in going to see Kagura could have been avoided if he just stayed home that night but since he went anyway he should have turned around and left when he realized that she tricked him but instead he let his dick take over. What he should have done was explained to Kagome what happened since they were only in the beginning of their relationship, Kagome most likely would have forgiven him and he wouldn't have to worry about a secret he had been trying to keep all those years. This is from real life experience. Now he is going to have nothing but drama from here on out when the truth comes out and Kagome finds out.

He has been a good husband to her all these years and now a baby is on the way but something tells me that Touga is going to find out about Kagura first and use it to ruin Sessho and Kagomes's marriage. Karma's a bitch and whatever Touga does it should come back ten times more on him. I hope that through it all they will stay together and get and keep the happiness they deserve.

This is a good and enjoyable story. Keep it going. I want to see Touga get what's coming to him eventually.


Halcali (Chapter 5) - Tue 05 Jul 2016

Things are progressing nicely. This is like the calm before the storm, lol. Can't wait to read how everything unfolds. Thank you for the update!


Zyren (Chapter 5) - Sat 02 Jul 2016

Ok so I really really like this story BUT its kinda unrealistic. Sesshoumaru is haunted by his mistake of sleeping with his ex girlfriend 10 years ago? But from my understanding he and Kagome had only been dating for like 3 months, he was cold to her and still hung up on Kagura. I feel like that's something that Kagome would have the capacity to forgive since she KNEW he wasnt over Kagura yet and it was TEN years ago. Im hoping there's more to the story. 


Mona (Chapter 5) - Sat 02 Jul 2016

I'm curious to find out what Sesshoumaru has done.  Did he cheat? Does he have a child? Does he have a secret lover? or something totally different but equally as bad?  Anyway hope to read more soon.


Halcali (Chapter 4) - Sun 26 Jun 2016

Uh-oh. Kagura's back. I can't wait to read more about her. Is she purposely seeking him out, I wonder?

I love that we get to read Sesshoumaru's pov. Good to know he's properly contrite and regretted what he did, but he still made a mistake and did not come clean about it.

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next!


Mona (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 Jun 2016

What did Sesshoumaru do? Kagura?

Please update again soon.


Mona (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Jun 2016

Well whatever turn this fic takes I hope Kagome does not turn out to be weak mentally and physically.  If the infidelity happened on more than one occassion, let her splurge and have her own fun.  See if Sesshoumaru is the one male she wants to spend the rest of her life with.  Just my opinion.  Also, is this an all human fic? or are there yokai, hanyou, priestesses and monks.


sesskag493 (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Jun 2016

I can't wait to read the next chapter. I can already tell this will be one of my favorite stories to read. I hope you update soon. 

 

Also, I don't mind reading a story filled with angst.......but could you please  give them a Happy ending.  Just from this first chapter I can tell that they deserve happiness, together with one another. 


Mona (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Jun 2016

Interesting, im all for the not happily ever after if the reason for Kagome and Sesshoumaru's separation is due to deceit, cheating and hurt.  It is very typical in most fanfics where Sesshoumaru cheats, deceives, abuses and stifles Kagome, and in the end she, without exploring other outcomes or suitors, takes Sesshoumaru back.  So if having them seperate and divorce is what happens I'm ok with it.

Well I'm looking forward to reading more soon.

p.s. Is this an all human version?


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