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Debra (Chapter 16) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

Very good chapter. I love how you have Kagome starting to plan ahead for a possible future without her husband. After all she can’t just rush into either option without careful thought. Making a plan to better herself in case she can’t go back to her marriage and has to start taking care of herself is really good. I think you make it very realistic with Kagome. She doesn’t want her marriage to fall apart, but she knows it may already be too late for that. So she’s making plans, of course we all know that Sesshoumaru will provide for his son no matter what, but Kagome would want to be able to take care of herself.

Loved how the brothers dealt with their father, liked how Sesshoumaru just lost it on his father. I look forward to the next chapter.


SammyJams (Chapter 16) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

Amazing update! I’m happy Kags decided to work things out!


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 17) - Wed 25 Apr 2018

i think this chapter belongs to your other story!  


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 15) - Sat 21 Apr 2018

I'm glad she's giving him the chance. And I like the snuggles at the end lol.


Drianax (Chapter 15) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Excellent chapter!  Needs a bit more angst...on Sess' part...something like a HUGE fight with Kagura and Malik.  I think Kagsess has been through enough.  But since I love angst...dealers choice!


Debra (Chapter 15) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Something like this story can’t be rushed unless you do lots of time skips. Kagone needs lots of time to deal with this, and figure out if she can go back to this relationship happily. If she rushes to say yes, she could be completely miserable, not trusting her husband, and the marriage fail anyway.  If she divorces him too quickly she could regret not giving it more time or thought. I personally think it would fit the story better if they do get divorced, making the haughting mistakes title more fitting. It’s a mistake that will forever haught him because he lost his wife. You could always get them back together and say he’ll always be haughted by almost distroying his marriage, but I think the other way would be more meaningful.

Eitherway I look forward to seeing where you take this story. :)


Koree (Chapter 15) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

WOW !! Really Touga i mean i knew he was abusive but it just sucks because he put Izayoi in such a terrible state & they couldn't even get her to a hospital but thank god for Sessho he literally saved her life , saved everyone from even more hurt than some of them are xurrently going through , anywho amazing chap !!!


Natalia (Chapter 15) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Everything is so messed up... I still think that child is not his. And I know it hurts her butmaybe she will try to understand. I am aware that there is this issue with withdrawal since kagura was his girlfriend and he had attachment to her no matter what. I didn't know that was real myself until I saw that in real life s few times. Even after divorce so yes... So sesshoumaru just made a mistake but regrets it...

 

The thing with Rin and izayoi was totally unexpected!

Eagerly waiting for more.

Thanks for updating.


Koree (Chapter 14) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Awww i was hoping for sometime of progress with them , great chap 


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 14) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

I hope he gets a small reprieve, either that or Kagome get a small glimpse of the torture he is putting himself though.


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 14) - Sat 07 Apr 2018

Finally he grew a pair! I hope a blood test is on the horizon if Kagura is dumb.....guess we'll see.


Debra (Chapter 14) - Sat 07 Apr 2018

Great chapter. Glad he finally told off his father, even if it was to late. Since he should have done it when Kagome was still happily with him.


roberta. (Chapter 13) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

OK my question is how did she have papers proving him the father if he took no test??? He didn't even know she had a child?


Natalia (Chapter 13) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Oh my god so kumu drama. It's refreshing to see kagome not forgiving easily. So many would do it for the child. My parents divorced in the same situation. Almost, the mistemis was pregnant. But I can tell that the children suffer the most. They don't care about that. They just need their parents...

Sad chapter.

Thx for updating.


Debra (Chapter 13) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

I liked how Kagome asked Sesshoumaru how he could ask her to do something her couldn’t. I was a little annoyed that Inuyasha and Kikyo seemed to take up most of the chapter. I got bored with them and was worried there would be no Kagome and Sesshoumaru at all. I wish there had been more Kagome. She has so much to deal with, there is a lot to show for her.  The pain of dealing with his betrayal since like she said it throws everything that happened with them after he cheated into question. It is very understandable that she wouldn’t be able to deal with having Malik, the constant reminder of his betrayal, in her life.There is also going to be her trying to find her way on her own as she seperates from him as Malik and Kagura move into his life more.

Then of course there is also Sesshoumaru dealing with losing his wife due to his own mistakes. He‘s got be dealing with guilt over hurting her as well, and knowing that the child she carries, the one he has been wanting, will grow up in a broken home now As well.

 I really hope the next chapter has more Kagome, please.


Mona (Chapter 13) - Thu 29 Mar 2018

She never got to ask if he cheated on her with others. I hope she just co-parent with him and not get back together. 


Koree (Chapter 12) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Baby steps Kags baby steps , great chap


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Glad to see you updated this story. I am anxious to see if they can get past this. I have to say I dont understand Sesshoumaru. If he loves Kagome so much and would do anything to get her back, why is he accepting everything so easily? Is there still something with Kagura in some way that causes him not to question this situation or make any attempt at getting to the truth on his own? I would think if he was so desperate to keep Kagome, he would be trying everything under the sun and one of the biggest and most immediate problems is the boy so you would think that would be the first thing he tries to eliminate by proving it's not his.

Just sharing my thoughts. I hope you are able to update again sooner than later.

Oh and Happy Easter!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Wonderful chapter! RL can get nuts, good luck with everything and dont worry about timing for posts RL should, and does, come first. (: I look forward to more!


Nicole (Chapter 12) - Sat 15 Apr 2017

Great story!! I can't wait for the next one!!


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