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Unplanned by Amadoni

Unplanned

Unplanned

From conception, the half-breed took his father. And then when his father died, he took his sword. But that wasn't enough; he took his arm as well. So when the Daiyoukai crossed passed with his brother again. He did what any respectable demon would do. He took retribution and took the girl.

She bit and scratched and kicked and screamed and tried to run so many numerous times that even he had lost count; she was like the rest of her kind, uncivilized. But that wasn't the point.

Eventually she stopped running.

And as they traveled from place to place, toad, child, and dragon in tow, she eventually stopped her fits of screaming--a little less uncivilized and a little more reserved.

His plan was to make the half-breed suffer. He didn't plan what he would do with the girl after taking her.

Every season it becomes more and more difficult not to notice that she is no longer the half-breed's female but 'his'.

He still is uncertain what kind of 'his' she is. But then that wasn't the point.

She gave her kindness when he gave her his nothingness. She gave her thoughts when he revealed none of his own. She gave protection when he wasn't there to give it.

And then one day, she wasn't a girl anymore.

Then one day, he finally began to notice what 'his' she really was to him.

So when he finally gave himself to her, she accepted it. Though in his mind, he was simply taking what was always his, even if that wasn't the point.

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INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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