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Once Upon The Broken Wings by Deadly Teardrops

Chapter 1; Whispers

Once Upon The Broken Wings

Rating; R

Genre; Angst, Drama, Romance

Warnings; Violence, abuse, male x male x male rape! Strong language!

Summary: Having glasses, being unpopular and always pulled and abused at school and home. Having no taste for life, is suicide only way to end the pain?

Author's Note: Konnichi wa minna-san! Watashi wa Ame Nishi desu! Some of you readers may have written my fics before can clearly see the difference between my writing style back then and now. So I welcome old and new readers to this new (actually old) fic of mine.

I don't know when I will update, so don't wait new chapters to be posted every week. I have a life, busy one. This story itself has been on my compter for 1 ½ years, so I just fixed few bad grammal mistakes and decided to post it here and see what other people thinks about it.

Now, the critic is always welcomed along with suggestions of how I can improvise my writing skills, but flames are not allowed. Only naïve people write those, thinking they are better than the rest. So be mature while you leave your comments, thank you!


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"..."- Speaking

'...' – Talking with sign language

Thinking


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Welcome to the Once Upon The Broken Wings.

My name is Nishi Ame and I'm here to tell you story of true life style, which I have some experience.

While others tell about fairytales, I tell you about real life and how hard it can be. How there isn't always happy endings and true loves. As how you think you have found the one, the soulmate you have dreamt of, after marriage he turns out to be total opposite of gentle and caressing man you thought him to be. Or how family isn't always there to support you or cheer up so you could go on.

I hope you enjoy, please remember to leave your comments after this, no flames, please only critics of how I can improvise my writing skills. Thank you.


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Chapter 1; Whispers

He always took everything people said or did right into his heart, no matter if it was good or bad.

".... You're just a loser! Ha ha! A geek! I always knew you would wear glasses one day!" A shorthaired fifteen years old full blooded Japanese boy laughed at his tall half Chinese, half Japanese albino half big brother.

The half-breed just continued to do his English essay, which was due for tomorrow morning, ignoring the younger one in hopes for him leaving once he noticed he was not paying attention on him.

"Hey, freak! Are you even listening to me? Or have you gone deaf, too?" The younger one grinned, but when he got no response from the older one, he pushed the power button of the computer, closing the machine.

"Hey! I didn't even save that document Inuyasha!" The older one yelled in surprise and anger of losing his five hours work into nothing.

"So? It wasn't even good one," The one called Inuyasha shrugged as he walked out of his half brother's room with a grin on his face.

The older one sighed in sadness, feeling like he was going to cry. He had worked so hard on that essay! Everyday he had gone after school to the library, spending there every free time he had on two week.

Why does he always have to pick on me? Why don't he just leave me alone, is that too much to ask? He thought melancholy as he got up around the computer and went to lock the door of his room, Just one year, Sesshomaru. Just one year before you're off to university where no one can or will bully you around! He told himself as he took his pen and notebook, starting to do an essay of his worst subject; English...

~*~

"Look, there he is again! Gosh, I wonder why the school lets those kind of freaks here!"

"Have you seen his eyes?"

"Yeah! They are so scary looking! I wonder if he wears contact lenses, but now that he has those... * snigger * those geek eyeglasses I'm not so sure anymore,"

Whispers around the school hallway could be heard as the albino walked quietly towards cafeteria with his head bend down.

"Well, well, well! What do we have here? Our fave punch pag... * chuckle * Did you bring the money we asked, nerd?" A leader of the school gang, Kouga, asked as he walked over to the lightly trembling albino.

"Please, I don't have any money with me! Please, don't hurt me! I couldn't get any!" The albino begged as Kouga's right hand- Inuyasha- and left hand- Miroku blocked his only hopes for escape as they pushed him against the lockers.

"Don't shit around, bastard! I saw dad giving you money this morning!" Inuyasha snapped.

"B-but they are my lunch money!"

"So? We need the money so we can buy some beer and tobacco," Miroku grinned.

"Please! Not my lunch money! I promise I will bring you the money on the next week!" Sesshomaru begged.

"Not a chance. We need the money now, you freak!"

"You can choose will you give the money with or without fight. It's your choice, nerd," Kouga smirked, showing his fist against the albino's stomach, while Miroku took the money from the gasping boy's pocket, " I usually choose to fight," The leader grinned and walked away laughing with his two friends towards the cafeteria, leaving the poor Sesshomaru sit on the school's empty hallway, holding his stomach in pain.

What am I going to do now? Those where my whole week's lunch money that father gave me this morning! He thought, feeling the tears behind his eyes wanting to fall, No! I won't cry in public!

He slowly got up from the floor and took his backpack which he had dropped on the floor when Kouga hit him on the stomach, and made his way outside to the school's garden in hopes to spend his lunch break there, alone...

He let out a sigh of pain as he finally made it to his own special place, which he shared with his two friends, Imano Kanna – who was also albino and spoke with sign language- and Hirai Naraku- who was Chinese and outcast because of it just like him. Today neither of his friends were at school for due of being sick.

I guess I have to start losing some weight He thought, still thinking about his lost lunch money as he took a water bottle out of his back.

"Oh, I'm sorry! I didn't know someone was here! Umm... Can I join you? My name is Higurashi Kagome, I'm almost new here," A girl with a long ebony hair and most stunning blue eyes asked as she stepped into a small clearing from out of nowhere.

"Uh... Sure," Sesshomaru mumbled quietly, trying his hardest not to blush, She's first girl who has ever spoken to me aside from Kanna, but she does not count since she uses sign language

"So, what's your name? I haven't seen you around before, are you new here, too?" She asked.

"Uh... My name is Sugimi Sesshomaru, I'm not new here," He whispered quietly, taking a sip from his bottle of water, blushing as his stomach grumbled in hunger.

"Are you hungry? Haven't you eaten lunch yet?" The girl, Kagome, asked while she took her lunch packet from her yellow backpack.

"Uh... I'm on diet," He answered quietly.

"On diet?" Kagome repeated, looking at him doubtfully, "Why on earth are you on diet? You're not overweight; actually you're quite too tin in my option... Here, take another one of my sandwiches. Mom always packs too much for me to eat," She said with a smile as she offered him her other sandwich.

"Uh... Are you sure?" He asked in disbelief, Why is she so kind to me? Or is she just acting?

"Yeah, I'm sure... here,"

"Thank you," He gave her a small nod and took the sandwich, taking a small bite of it as if in test that it wasn't filled with anything uneatable, but seeing that it was just a normal sandwich, he gave her a small smile and thanked her once again.

"You're welcome, Sesshomaru-san," She smiled back...

~*~

*THUND *

"What it is that I heard about you flirting with Miroku's girl, huh?" Kouga asked as he threw the familiar albino boy against boy's PE's lockers of the empty locker room.

"I don't know what you are talking about! Please, don't hurt me!" He cried in fear and pain as Inuyasha kicked him to his sides and stomach.

"Oh? Now really? Are you telling me that me and my friends are lying?" Kouga asked before kicking him.

Sesshomaru coughed, crying out in pain as he tried to breath.

"Well? Are you going to answer to me or what?"

"Yeah, freak! Weren't you with Kagome today at lunch break, sharing her lunch like a little puppy?"

The albino tried to answer, but failed as he also tried to take some air into his lungs.

"Yô, Kouga! The teacher is coming! Quickly, let's get outta of here!" Miroku yelled from the doorway.

"Alright!" Kouga nodded to him before kicking one final time the albino on the stomach, making him cough blood, " Let it be last time you speak or even look at Kagome!"

"Shit! Let's go!" Miroku yelled as the three of them ran out of the boys' dressing room, leaving the half conscious, coughing, injured albino lying on the floor....

~*~

He lay on his bed, feeling like if he moved he was going puke again. His sides hurt like a truck full of heavy, metal objects had hit him. He sighed, feeling as dizzy spell took a hold on his mind for a while when he tried to move his injured hand under his pillow.

A door of his room opened and an old lady stepped into the room, bringing bandages, pills and stuff to him.

"Kaede-san, what time is it?" He asked, feeling his throat burning as he tired to speak.

"It's half past eleven at morning, dear," The lady replied as she closed the door and walked over to his bed. She set the stuff on the table next to his bed, taking a few pills from a brown bottle and class of water, giving them to him, " Are you up to eat anything?" She asked while watching him to swallow the pills along with the water.

"No, Kaede-san. I don't think I will be able to eat anything for a while," He answered quietly, turning his gaze away from the family's old friend and doctor.

"Hm," Kaede just replied as she started to clean the wounds on his body, " Are you ready to tell me who did this to you? You know this is starting to get suspicious. This isn't first time you come home from school looking like you have been driven over by truck," She nodded continuing, "Are you been bullied at school?"

"I... I just fell down the stairs at school," Came a lame lie from the injured boy's mouth, " It's nothing serious, Kaede-san,"

"Yes it is, Sesshomaru! If you are bullied at school, getting beated so badly that you can barely move, it's serious! And that's not bulling anymore, Sesshomaru, it's abusing and police's business!"

"Please, Kaede-san, I just fell down the stairs at school, nothing else," Sesshomaru told her with a fake smile on his face, " Besides, if I was to be bullied, I would hit them back, just like you have taught me to do when I was a kid,"

Kaede gave him a serious face before nodding her head, " But, if you come home one more time, looking like this, then I will come to school with polices, is that clear young man?"

"Yes, Kaede-san, thank you," He thanked as she finished bandaging his body.

"You're welcome, boy. Now, you must take these pills every fourth hour, it's for the pain and do not take that bandage from your arm away for a week but only to change it, is that clear?"

"Yes, Kaede-san, thank you,"

"Hm. Now get some rest and call the servants if you need to move, you're feeling like puking or anything else, ok?"

"Yes, Kaede-san," Sesshomaru yawned, trying his hardest not to fall asleep, but in the end, the sleepiness won and he fell into a nightmare filled dreams full of his bullies...

~*~

He sat quietly inside his bedroom. He was afraid. His father was away on a business trip at whole weekend, leaving him alone with his brother and his friends whom he always brought over. It had been over two months since the day his half-brother and his friend had beat him almost to pulp. He shivered in fear, trying his hardest not to cry for it made him bully him even more.

The door of his room was suddenly thrown open as two males stepped into the room, Miroku and Kouga. Inuyasha was downstairs fallen into a drunken sleep for drinking too much.

"Look what we have here, Miroku," Kouga purred as he stepped inside the room while Miroku locked the door.

"Ah, what a nice surprise! Just when I was in mood for some fun, ne Kouga?" Miroku smirked as they made their way towards the trembling albino who sat on his bed.

"Hmm-mm, you're absolute right..." He chuckled as he took handcuffs from his jeans pocket.

"No! Please not again!" Sesshomaru begged with a tears falling down his golden-brown eyes as he tried to back away from the two of them.

WARNING RAPE!!! MALE X MALE X MALE!!! WARNING RAPE!!!

"Oh, did we make you cry? But we haven't even started yet!" Miroku laughed as he took a hold on the albino's hands, while Kouga locked them together with his handcuffs.

"NO! PLEASE I BEG YOU! PLEASE DON'T DO THIS!! I'LL GIVE YOU ANYTHING YOU WANT!! JUST DON'T DO THIS!!!" Sesshomaru cried, trying to struggle free from his bullies hold while Miroku took his pajama pants and boxers away, leaving his downer body naked as they laid the albino on his stomach.

"I'm sure you're going to enjoy it this time, Sesshomaru," Kouga laughed as he zipped his jeans down, taking his penis out.

"Yeah, nerd... You're going to love it!" Miroku chuckled as he in turn took his own throbbing penis out. He went behind the albino who was now forced on his hands and knees while Kouga pushed his manhood on his face.

The leader gave Miroku a small nod as a signal to start, who nodded in back, pushing his cock deep inside the albino's anal hole, making him cry out in pain before it was muffed by Kouga's penis in his mouth.

"Gosh, even after these two years, you're so tight! Oh, this feels so good!" Miroku moaned as he moved his body against the albino's, fastening his speed everytime he pulled out, while Kouga pumped himself into the whelp's mouth.

"Hell yeah! This is what I call a good blow-job!" Kouga moaned, as he trusts his hips forwards.

Miroku took a hold on Sesshomaru's lifeless penis, starting to stroke it, willing it to come alive- he started with a slow pace, quickening it after every fifth. He massaged the head with his thump, smirking as he felt it hardening.

"It seems someone is getting horny, Kouga," Miroku panted, feeling his own orgasm close. He tightened his hold on the albino's penis, moving his hand faster and faster as he felt himself coming.

"Oh shit! I'm cumming already! Fuuuucccckkk!" He moaned as he spilled his seed into the sobbing Sesshomaru's hole, smirking as he tightened his hold on he albino's manhood, making him cum while he cried in shame.

"Oh yessss!" Kouga howled as he came hard into the boy's mouth, making him gag, "Swallow it all, you little whore!" He ordered as he took the key of the handcuffs, opening them and putting them back into his pocket, while he dressed

!!!! END!!!!!! END!!!!!! END!!!!!! END!!!!!! END!!!!!!

"Here're two yens. You have earned them," Miroku, who was already fully dressed, laughed as he threw the money next to the sobbing albino.

"Until next time, gigolo!" Kouga yelled laughing as they walked out of the room but not before spitting on the boy, closing the door behind them...

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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