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Growed Down by PissyWitch

Grow up, Inuyasha

This is the one fanfiction of mine that people didn't really like but I'll give it another chance. I changed the title to it. It use to be "Grow up," but I don't think it brought in many people. But I'm going to see how it fairs. So here it is... Growed down!

Chapter 1 – Grow up, Inuyasha

"Beat it, Sesshoumaru!" Kagome yelled drawing her arrow in her bow. Inuyasha stood right next to her, with a drawn Tetsiaga.

Sesshoumaru stood at the edge of the forest with his emotionless eyes and mask.

"Sesshoumaru, you bastard, you know you will never get the Tetsiaga, so why are you trying? Fucker, you can't even hold it!" Inuyasha said and laughed. Kagome glared at Inuyasha for his language.

Sesshoumaru saw this and a small smirk appeared on his lips then vanished.

Inuyasha was staring at Sesshoumaru but did not see the smirk appear or disappear. He was glaring daggers at him until he glanced at Kagome. Kagome was giving Inuyasha the same glare he was giving Sesshoumaru but it was fiercer. "Nani?"

"Language, Inuyasha. Language," she said and aimed her bow back at Sesshoumaru who seemed to be gone! "Where'd he go?!"

"You will meet me soon, dear brother. And I will have Tetsaiga," Sesshoumaru's voice bellowed through the clearing. Inuyasha growled as Sesshoumaru's voice stopped and he was gone.

Inuyasha looked at Kagome; she was still glaring at him. He looked at her in confusion as he put away Tetsaiga. "Nani?"

She looked behind her shoulder at Shippo and back to Inuyasha. He saw what she did and the fire-like expression she had and he knew what was going to happen next.

"Kagome?" Inuyasha asked pleadingly, "Kagome, please, no..." he started to back away from her.

Her head was shaking with anger as she began to approach him. She uttered one word, very quiet, but very effective. The one word she uttered was, "Osuwari."

"No...oomph," Inuyasha yelled as he plummeted to the ground from the glow of the rosary around his neck.

"Osuwari, Osuwari, Osuwari," she said very quiet, like the first one, her bangs shadowing her eyes. She found that it wouldn't matter if she shows her anger or not because when she said osuwari and when she yelled it when she was angry, it had the same effect. So she decided she didn't want to lose her voice over Inuyasha anymore. In addition, she found out that the rosary pulls him down faster when she is calm.

(ANYWAY!)

The hole Inuyasha was in glowed and got three feet deeper, and he lost consciousness. Kagome didn't care; she just turned her heel and left the hanyou in his four-foot hole. On her way back, Sango and Miroku looked horrified, scared of Kagome. "Grow up, Inuyasha," she said and picked up Shippo and walked in the hut they were staying in.

"I see the hanyou and the miko don't get along too well," a beautiful young lady said as she watched Kagome walk off with Shippo in her arms and sango and Miroku trailing behind.

"The taiyoukai doesn't seem to get along with the hanyou or the miko, either," She said to herself making mental notes as she went.

Out of no where, the young lady heard the demon exterminator yell, "HENTAI!" and her hand flew to the monk's face, making contact.

The young lady just laughed, "And they are in love."

"Woah..." Inuyasha muttered as he carried his hurting body out of its four-foot hole. "Ouch, that wench is going to pay. I will make her pay."

Inuyasha swayed once he was on his feet. He slowly made his way back to the hut in the pure darkness, back and forth, as he went.

The young lady pointed her finger in the dark and her finger lit up. The ball of light floated at the tip of her finger.

This young lady was a well-known sorceress. Her name was Kokushi. She used to serve the east lord but that was before he abused her. She fled from him and took one thing with her and that's when it called.

"Little sister? Kokushi? What are you doing up here?" a girl looking just like Kokushi in everyway except that Kokushi's eyes where clear, giving them a white look to her eyes, due to a birth defect.

They are twins. Their features are amazingly beautiful. They have pointed ears, and pointed fingernails, which are clear showing the pinkness of her skin under her nails. Their hair, beautiful, pearly, silky, white, ends at the starting of her legs. In the middle of her forehead, not a crescent moon but, a gem, pure black on the inside and blood red on the outside, blending into the blackness in the middle. On the lower outside of her eyes, is the same size gem but it is horizontal not vertical like the one on her forehead. Their skin is a milky creamed with a light skin tone. Their lips are a luscious ruby gloss, glistening in the light of Kokushi's lit finger.

"Reiba?" Kokushi looked at her twin, ignoring her big sister's earlier question of what she was going up in the tree.

"Kokushi, you know not to mess with other's lives," Reiba said. She looked at Kokushi, who looked put out. Reiba shook her head. Kokushi, don't you know how much trouble you were in the last time you played with someone else's life?

Yes, another voice came into Reiba's head. Kokushi looked very annoyed at the mirror in front of her. She turned away, folding her arms. You take the fun out of everything, Reiba, she said, telepathically.

Reiba took a hold of Kokushi's chin and turned her head to face her. "I will let you," Reiba said, Kokushi's face lit up, "only, you have to let me in on it!" Reiba smiled and laughed.

"Okay, so I was thinking, since the taiyoukai is the hanyou's older brother, and the miko is motherly..." Kokushi started.

"Thinking about this long, have you?" Reiba said, simpering at the two-minute younger version of her.

"In fact, I just thought of it from the way I acted just a second ago and what the miko said to the hanyou," said Kokushi smirking back.

Reiba's navy blue eyes got bigger as her pupils grew into cat-like slits. She almost stuttered as she spoke, "Yoou mean...?" and she left Kokushi to fill in the rest, which she did.

Kokushi just slyly grinned as she held out her hands. "You in?"

Reiba's eyes cleared back to their navy hue and she put the same sly grin. "You bet," the eldest twin said and took both of her sister's hands. "The miko first?"

Receiving a nod from Kokushi, they closed their eyes, and their faces went emotionless as they began to chant, "Twist the bones and send her back, not to advance..."

What do you think? Should I continue with it or just let it die? Review!

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