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A Normal Day at School

AU: Yes, I know, you must be really tired of author notes write now - I was wondering if anyone could revise my chapters for me? I know that my grammar and language is probably acceptable, but then I hate paragraphs and so I'm looking for someone who is willing to read my chapters over and edit them a little before I post them. Just email me if there's anyone who would like to help me! And unlike lots of authors here, english is my first language so I don't know much japanese terms, but I do know a few.

Ok, heres the story!

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" " - spoken out words

*Ding Dong* Kagome Higurashi sighed. *Here comes math class...* As she walked down the hall, she saw Sesshoumaru Takahashi – walking with his usual fan club. He was the most popular guy in school, just because of his looks and money. He had platinum blonde hair, and he had stunning golden eyes. He was known for his coldness, but that didn't faze all those girls – they thought that everything about him was attractive. Actually, Kagome was one of his few friends, which made almost everyone jealous of her. As she walked towards him, she got a few evil glares from the girls of his fan club.

"Hi Sess!" Kagome said. Trying to wrench himself free of their prying hands, he replied, "Hi...so, what class do you have next?" as they walked together down the hallway. "Math...sigh...I still don't know why I suck so much at it!" she said. Sesshoumaru smiled (gasp!!) and replied, "You always hated math...you want to come over to my house after school for me to tutor you?" he said. "Sure!" she said. Kagome reached her classroom. "Well, I'll see you after school!" "Ok, bye." She slid in her seat in between 2 of her best friends – Rin Maori and Sango Maori (they were sisters). "So, anything happen today you two?" Kagome said. "Not much," both of them replied.

The teacher walked in. "Class, please open your textbooks to pages 100 and 101".

~Later, after school~

"Well, I'll see you two tomorrow! I'm gonna go to Sess's house. He's gonna tutor me." Kagome said.

"Ok, see you tomorrow!" they both said as they walked back to their house.

AU – Ok, ok, I promise the next chapter will be longer, but I need ideas! I'm running out of ideas to use...please review!!

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