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Deaths Ward by Engel-Deamoness-C.D.

Let The Slaughter Begin

ED-C.D.-ok i am trying to make this a grusome chapter full of blood and violence, also be aware that the Monster will be refered to it, creature or he so you will be surprised at the end!

As it silently padded through the silence of Hells Forest, ears keen for any sudden movements or noises, then it heard laughter. The Creature smiled a cold evil smile, that could freeze the sun in all its blazing furry. From the sound of it there seemed to be four sets of laughter to the north. Its smile broadened at the hope of a worthy pray!

It slowly crept twords the unsespecting pray,getting closer and closer with each deadly step. Then it lunged out into the open clearing, teeth glistining and claws twitching with anticipation of the kill. It's dark green eyes full of malice, and dried flaky blood on the Creatures muscular form from the last prey.

The creature let out a Ferocious roar, that echoed through the cold night. The fearsome beast looked down upaun the puny quary, parilized with terror. It sniffed the cool crisp air and immeadietly caught there fear, this once again made it smile with its razor sharp steel teeth glistening in the dancing fire light.

The terror filled humans slowly edged away from the frightening being, but unfortunately they diddn't get very far.

The Creature jumped on the closest human,stabbing the poor boy through the chest ripping out everthing it could in one grab. The poor defenceless boy let out an ear peircing scream angering the creature as it smashed his head in, to end the scream.( i just love to point out the obvious. anyways if it could smell there emotions then obviosly it has very good hearing!)

The two survivors bolted into the forest trying to escape the terror that was intent on killing them in ways that would make jack the ripper look like an amature.(jack the ripper was a ceriel(sp) killer in london during the 1800's, he was believed to be a physician because he killed whores in london and sugicaly removed pats of there organs, and it was also susspected that he ate their organs in some kind of ritual.....watch from hell with jhony dep, my Older sister has a book on infamous serial killers. In the book he is often called the grandfather of ceriel killers....so what if i read some of it i was curious....ON WITH THE FIC!!!) It was seething with rage at the corpse, it wasn't even a challenge! This was the most annoying thing ever it didn't want to waist its time on the pathetic humans but the creature knew very well that it couldn't leave any withnesses, or it would be a faital mistake. It leapt out of the clearing and into the dense forest, galloping twards the hunt!

Josh and Ryan charged blindly into the darkness, svared shitless and both felt death nipping at their heels. both minds racing trying to escape the evil following them. Addrenilynn pumped through there veins aiding them in speed.

It was quickly closing in on its pray intent on making sure they both felt agony. The creature started to run on all fours gaining even more speed. It leapt at Josh landing on his back and knocking the other boy down spraining his ankle.

The Creature knew the other quary was injured and would be slow so it ignored the one infront of him and started slashing at the helpless fragile human under his feet. the young mans yepls and screams were muffled by the dirt. It let the other escape limping at at hurried slow pace. the creature slowly pushed his claws into the humans back letting the quary feel every painfull sensation. the creature then sliced through the back again breaking the ribsand quickly removed the spinal cord along with all the intestinal cord. the human was dead but just to make sure it crushed the skull, so it would be extreamly difficul to identifi the body.(In murder files if the body is burned to a crisp, mutilated till it looks like a mass of flesh or in any case where the face is unnreconizable and no tatoos then cops depend on dental records to identifi a body....sorry way too much Law and Order!)

The creature then grabed the intestin and tracked the last kill down.

Ryan's mind was racing, he couldn't think of a way to escape, but every senerio was crushed, He couldn't count on the stars due to the dense foliage covering the sky, his compas was broken due to him falling on it when that thing landed on Josh's back. The forest was soo dark he could barley see five feet in front of him. Suddenly he heard a twig snap his head reared to the shrub next to him he slowly becked away then swiftly turned and rammed into a tree. He was having a hard time breathing knowing he was to die.The shifting of leaves and snaps gew louder quickly. Ryans whole life was flashing before him then and there, he prayed he would have a quick death. then the bush parted to reveal.....a squirrel? ryan stood imeadeatly to scare away the squirrel. When the tiny creature saw him approach it ran like a bat outt hell. Ryan growled as he turned to leave, there infront of him stood the Beast covered head to toe in blood, drool mixing with the blood and to his horror in the monsters mouth was what could only be josh's intestin, his stomach heaved, but nothing came up the monster pinned himto the nearest tree by the neck dangling a few feet from the ground. the monster thrust its face to his sniffing, then growled deep in his throat the terrified boy who just then peed his pants. The Creature sniffed and looked down, it roared in ryans face then thrust its hand inbetween Ryans legs and ripped out his balls and member in one solid tug and then trew it away.(No Children for you!)The boy screamed in agony as the creature took advantage of the situation and ripped out his toung then soved it in hs throut(sp?) to choke on. Ryan's body went into a seiser due to lack of air and then died. The Creature doped the body and went to retreive the intestinal cord. it then tried to tie a not around the dead bodys neck with difficulty but finualy succed. The beast thew the makeshift roap aroud a tree breach and tied it off around the tree. Before it left the body it cut the stomach open, then the guts plopped to the ground with a sickening thud.(Hannabal Lector Style in Hanibal Cool/very creapy movie Starring Anthany Hopkins, he is soo weird but cool in the movie cuz he's so creapy!) When it was satisfied with its work it dissapeared into the remains of the dark night, leaving in its wake 3 mutilated bodies.

MUHAHAHAHAHA scary yes! i decided to dedicate this quiz to my sister for her help on cerial cases ideas, then i also dedicate this to my 8 Mountain Dew sodas for keeping me awake and hyper and last but not least to my toothbrush for getting rid of the sugar on my teeth.

Heres a mini quiz (my sister gave me the answers)

Which of these four cerial killers lived in Milwaukee,Wisconsin

A) Ed Gein

B)Albert Fish

C)Jeffery Dahmer

D)Ted Bundi

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