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I just write the stroy. YOU make one up. by Kirei

Altering is bad...

Kirei: Hey! Sorry! My parents got a new house so we've been moving and now I have a mild case

of writers block. Instead of being able to focus on my other story new ones keep popping into

my head.

Inuyasha: Stupid humans.

Kirei: BITE ME!

Inuyasha: *cowering* What was THAT for?

Kirei: Sorry. I'm just stressed and tired. We've been pulling all nighters to get in the house.

Inuyasha: Well it's no reason to bite my head off!

Kirei: Get over it puppy!

Inuyasha: Why you...

Kagome: Sit! Kirei...how about this story?

Kirei: Right. For some reason I remembered the time when they were in Inuyasha's Father's tomb

and what if instead of Jaken calling Kagome 'stupid human' he called her 'ugly human' and made

Kagome cry. So intead of Sesshomaru stopping his attack against Inuyasha because Kagome pulled

out Tetsusaiga it's because she's crying. Oh and it's been a while since I saw this episode so

if it's a bit wrong please don't hurt me. I don't exactly have the best memory.

Kagome and Sesshomaru: This is going to be a long night.

Kirei: Hey! Do I insult you two?! No I don't!

Disclaimer: It-wasn't-me! Oh, reflex. I don't own Inuyasha.

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"Allow me to give my assistance, M'lord," Jaken said waving his staff over his head.

Kagome jumped on Jaken's head to stop him.

"Two against one's not fair!" Kagome yelled.

Jaken growled and swiped at Kagome with his staff. kagome caught it and fought against Jaken.

"You stupid toad," Kagome gritted out.

"You ugly human," Jaken said.

Kagome paused. Jaken looked at her wondering why she wasn't fighting him anymore. In the

background Sesshomaru had pinned Inuyasha down and cracked his knuckles preparing to run him

through.

"I-I'm not ugly!" Kagome yelled falling to her knees and began crying.

Jaken was dumbfounded. Sesshomaru paused in his attack.

"Uh...What?" he whispered.

All three stared at Kagome as she cried.

"What did you say to her?!" Inuyasha yelled at Jaken.

Sesshomaru and Inuyasha stood up looking at Kagome. Neither quite sure what to do. Unfortuantly,

for the brothers neither liked to see a girl cry. Human or demon. Something they picked up from

their father. Who's gut they just happen to be in. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru carefully made their

wau over to Kagome. They stood to either side of her and looked down at her.

"K-Kagome?" Inuyasha asked.

"I'm not ugly!" she sobbed.

Sesshomaru kicked Jaken.

"You just HAD to make her cry, didn't you?" he said.

Kagome looked up at Inuyasha, "You don't think I'm ugly, do you?" she asked quietly.

Inuyasha froze. Sesshomaru looked at him expectanly causing Inuyasha to blush.

"Answer her," Sesshomaru whispered not wanting to see her cry anymore so he could kill Inuyasha.

"I-I...I'm not answering," Inuyasha said quickly and turned away.

"Y-You think I'm ugly!" Kagome cried and started sobbing again.

Sesshomaru punched Inuyasha over towards Jaken.

"Idiots," he said.

He knelt down to Kagome.

"Stop crying," he said.

"Why? Everyone thinks I'm ugly," Kagome said.

"Uh...I...I...don't," he said whispering the last part.

Kagome paused and looked at him.

"What'ch you say?" she asked.

"I don't think you're ugly," he repeated.

"Promise," Kagome asked child like.

"I promise," Sesshomaru said picking her up bridal style.

Kagome rubbed her eyes and sniffed, "Thank you."

"Right...whatever," Sesshomaru said, sweatdropping.

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Kirei: They're so cute!

Sesshomaru and Kagome: *coming up behind Kirei with sharp and pointy objects* Die!

Kirei: *gulps* Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *runs away* *pauses* *throws gnomes at them* *runs away again*

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