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broken inside by jaystar

your weird

hey everyone this is my first fic so go easy on me if i rush things plz tell ill slow down a bit ok

Kagome walked down the halls of the high school shes been going to for two years, shes in the 11th grade. High school sucks for her because she never fitted in. Her friends are her sister, Rin, Sango,and Miroku. She wore nice clothes but never fitted in. Kagome sighs as she unlocks her locker. "Hey girly," Kagome heard a voice come behind her. She turns around. "Hey,Sango whats up," Kagome asked her. "Wow, Kagome where did you get that outfit i like it," Sango said. "Really, I just got this yesterday," Kagome told her. She had on dark blue hip huggers, and a white tank to match. Her stomach showed a little bit. She had her in tight bun and was wearing hoop earings. Kagome only put on eyeliner, lip gloss, and blush. She looked really nice. A few minutes later Rin and Miroku came running down the hallway toward Kagome and Sango. "San..go....Kag..om.e move out of the way!!," Miroku tried to say he was breathless. Kagome looked behind Miroku and say Inuyasha chase Kikiyo and thow things at her. Miroku put his back to the lockers and so did Rin man were they out of breath. Rumors went aroud school about Kagome and friends. She was fed up. It was time for lunch. Eveyone ate outside. The three sat at a table. Kagome didnt eat though. She felt like she wanted to yell out. She wanted the rumors to stop. Her head started to hurt. She couldnt take it no more. She wanted cry. She cant even live her life with those rumors eveybody believed because the didnt like her. "Come on,Kagome I know where you can scream your lungs out," Sango said. Kagome followed Sango to a quite place. Kagome looked around and saw no one. Sango put her hands on her ears waiting for the screaming to come. "Ahhhhhhh!!!!!," Kagome screamed at the top of her lungs and let the tears come. Sango uncoverd her ears and went to comfort Kagome. "I cant take this school no more Sango, I hate it here," Kagome cryed she let all her tears come from her eyes. The tears stung her eyes but she couldnt stop. She wanted to let go of her feelings. Sango rose and looked around. So one was there watching them. Kagome saw Sango get up. She rubed her eyes and said: "Whats wrong?." Kagomes eyes were red and puffy. "Nothing," Sango said. "Good cause I wanna do something, come on," Kagome dragged Sango back to the table where her friends were sitting. "Miroku number 8," Kagome orderd him. He turned on his boom box. Kagome stood on the table ready to loss some of her energy. The music strarted. Kagome started to move her body in a sexy way. Everyone stared at her. Then Sango and Rin followed her moves. Kagome moved faster lossing her breath as she danced in a faster way then her friends. She couldnt stop. Sesshomaru's "group" came outside. In his group was Kaugur, Kikiyo, Inuyasha,Hiten and Kouga. They all stoped and watched the human dance so fast and in a sexy way. Her small stomache showed more than it should have. Kagome's white tank rolled up and showed her beautiful body move in ways no one thought Kagome could do. From tiredness Kagome fainted almost to fall off but was caught by Miroku. "Wow, Kagome your good but now you cant even move," Miroku said sadly. Every clapped and cheered for her. She was the best dancer, now. Miroku walked while Kagome was still in his arms. Sango and Rin followed behind. The passed Sesshomaru's group every looking at the fainted girl Miroku held in his arms.

Later that nite

Kagome was finshed with her homework and went downstairs to help her mother with dinner. "So what did you do today,Kagome," asked mother while she stired the soup that was in a pot. "I showed everone that I can dance," Kagome said smileing very proud of herself for once in her life.

plz r&r srry i cant write no more ive been up all nite but not writeing this story all nite other things like party srry but im tired srry bye bye

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