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~*Wounded Heart*~ by Kiba

Chapter 1-Changes

~~**Mistresses Note: You know I finally got to editing the chapters that had problems in this story which were the first six or seven and then chapter 20

Kagome a young high school girl, was not your normal girl. She had a way to 500 years into the past, in her families shrine. It was called the Bone Eaters Well, a well only she and a hanyou named Inuyasha could travel through.

She loved Inuyasha deeply, and he had told her he loved her not long ago. He was cute and somewhat charming. When he wasn't tring to kill a demon who dared harm his Kagome. He told Kagome he would mate her one day, thus they could never part. In the demon world once mated to a demon or hanyou you were mates forever. Unless, you were killed by or killed your mate, but Kagome knew Inuyasha would never do that to her.

And now our story begins....

On this day though her heart was broken.

She could hear the sound of slapping flesh in the background. Kagome didn't know who it was, but she had a pretty good idea. She couldn't tell though, her human eyes wouldn't allow her to see through the darkness. Then she knew, when they spoke she knew.

"Oh Inuyasha," the woman moaned with pleasure.

"Yes Kagome," Inuyasha's voice rang in Kagome's ears. Had she heard him right? Did he just call a woman who was clearly not her, her?

She could hear the sound of the woman's voice as she climaxed with pleasure. "Oh Inu.......ya.......sha," she screamed into the night. She calmed down, "Inuyasha I love you."

"I love you to Kagome," Inuyasha said sinking his fangs into the woman's junction between her neck and shoulder. Inuyasha pulled his fangs out of her flesh, "Now you can never leave me Kagome, your mine forever." Inuyasha had said it with such joy and happiness. He then began licking up the blood of his mate, kissing her neck after he'd got it all off.

Kagome finally got the courage to see who the woman was. All she saw was herself. Kagome was shocked to say the least. The outfit, the body, the everything looked just like her. Then a white mist rose around the woman to show who she really was. 'Kikyo, the dead evil bitch,' Kagome thought. She had heard Inuyasha no longer loved her so she pretended to be Kagome. Now they could never part. Kagome watched as they fell asleep in each others arms, the mist allowing her to see.

She began to cry as she ran toward the well. Hoping she'd make it, when she tripped.(She is co clumsy sometimes.)Again and again she fell onto the forest floor. Ripping her clothes. She felt blood running down her face and legs.

Kagome reached the well, she jumped inside hoping never to return.

She never forgot that day. She blocked the well so Inuyasha couldn't follow her, not knowing what he'd do the next day.

~~~~The Next Day with Inuyasha~~~~

Inuyasha never felt better. He loved the feeling he had as he got up. He didn't open his eyes for he could smell 'Kagome' and he loved that smell. Kikyo still had her scent like the girl so Inuyasha wouldn't get mad right as he got up. He nuzzled the mating mark he'd given 'Kagome'. "Now you can never leave me Kagome," he felt joy and happiness. He'd mated with his Kagome, HIS KAGOME. Now she could never leave him for another man or youkai. He hated the thought of Kagome's tasty body rocking under that damn wolf Kouga's.

Kikyo had just woken up to find Inuyasha hadn't opened his eyes. Not once to look at his woman. That made her kind of angry. She locked lips with him. He moved closer letting his tounge invade her mouth, it was so warm.

He finally opened his eyes. This was not Kagome, that made him angry. "What the hell are you doing here Kikyo?" He didn't like the idea of his lips locked with hers, so he stopped his kissing actions. Backing away from her and her hateful greed to get rid of Kagome to get to him. He gave her a low growl.

She moved away not wanting him to get mad, "Why Inuyasha, you should know. Your the one who mated me and gave me this mark." She moved her neck and shoulder toward him.

'A mating mark,' Inuyasha thought about it, he growled again louder this time. "No.....no......NO! I gave that mark to Kagome. I can see in the dark and I saw myself place a mark on KAGOME, not you!" He was getting ticked, and Kikyo was beginning to get just a bit scared.

"No your wrong Inuyasha. You gave this mark to me! Last night you said nothing about that little copy of mine. How can you love a copy and not the real thing Inuyasha?" Kikyo said tring to calm her new lover down. She leaned into him only to be pushed away as he rose.

"Copy, copy? How dare you call Kagome a copy. At least she has real skin and bones," his youkai half was starting to take over at this point.

Kikyo was worried when she saw his eyes flicker from gold to red. 'His youkai half is taking over,' she was starting to really worry by now. 'What do I do?' That was all she had time to think about before he lost it.

"Bitch," Inuyasha's youkai growled, 'Kill her, kill her now,' his youkai kept yelling in his head. "You're still in my view and I hate that scent. Your were fooling me last night but your not fooling me now!" Inuyasha's in longed claws came crashing down on the dead miko.

Clay, dirt, and bones flew everywhere.

'Now that shes out of the way, time to find Kagome.' Those were Inuyasha's only thought before he took control of his other half. He set out to find Kagome. He hoped she was safe, and hadn't seen anything.

Kiba:

Mistress: Ok well there's my first edited chapter!

Inuyasha: Took yah long enough

Kagome: Oh shut up Inuyasha *Sits in

Sesshoumaru's lap~*

Inuyasha: Get the hell away from her Sesshoumaru!

Mistress: Here we go again

Sesshoumaru: Why Inuyasha? Go back to your Kikyo

Inuyasha: Kikyo's dead or were you not paying attention when she wrote the story

Sesshoumaru: I'm not in this chapter if you haven't noticed half-breed

Kagome: `sighs` Give it up Inuyasha I'll end up with him anyway

Inuyasha: Is that true Kiba?

Mistress: `Nods`

Inuyasha: WHAT THE HELL KIBA CHANGE TO A SITE WHERE I END UP WITH KAGOME!

Mistress: Inuyasha...

Inuyasha: What wench?

Mistress: Down!

THUD

Inuyasha: `groans`

Sesshoumaru: Could you do that again Kiba?

Kagome: Yah it was better then my sit

Thud

Kagome: Sorry Inuyasha

Mistress: On to the next chapter

Sesshoumaru: Just remember to RATE/REVIEW everyone

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