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Excruciating Torment by Calpurnia the Forlorn

Excruciating Torment

Cold hands held the squirming miko in place, face down on the icy stone floor. Her hands were held in a vice-like grip by her captor, and to make the arctic ground all the more uncomfortable, her clothing had been removed.

Every movement was a small death as the chilled air worked to drain all warmth from her skin. "Please." She begged. "Let me go."

A cruel chuckle caused another bought of icy blackness to overwhelm her, and a tongue made of molten heat washed up her back. She screamed. The heat was unbearable after all this cold.

"Precious pet, why would I do such a thing?" He inquired. Again the wet heat played mercilessly over her frozen flesh, and tears as hot as flame became pools of fevered lava below her. Strong hands clamped tighter as she bucked away from the heat. A sharp bite held her still.

A gentle brush of fangs here, a nip there, an encouraging moan and the press of flesh against flesh soon had the girl swooning past the tears, diving head first into the unknown. A clawed hand caught and held each curve as it moved to take hold of her rounded buttocks.

A soft, pliant cry brought a vicious smirk to the tormentor's lips. The one free hand moved down, pushing against thighs stiff from lack of use. Soon she was open to him and tears began anew as comprehension dawned. "No more." She begged. "Anything you want, if only for no more."

Laughter as frigid as the tepid air froze on crimson lips caught on a snow-colored back ground. "You will not deny me this again." He whispered, leaning forward to capture feathery cold lips in a bruising embrace.

A sharp nip to her neck sent her reeling until she could fight him no more.

Small hands worked their way free, pushing against the stone until she lay on her back, thighs spread wide. Amusement colored amber eyes. Lips met in a luminescent frenzy, coloring the languid chill over with a heat as bright as the burning sun.

Pressing down, the male claimed his way-ward female, eliciting a small scream from honeyed lips. Together they remained frozen in place, awaiting the moment when pain became the intense ach that drew them up into its perverse hold, driving them onto greater things.

Lips caught and held in a fiery embrace, hips crashed together and thighs tightened. Hot tears lit the girl's face as she cried out, encouraging her lover to drive down faster, deeper.

An unbearable need arose between them, and the thrusts reached new heights to complete it.

Ensanguined lips found and sank over a pliant breast, suckling even as he drove his hips forward in a faster frenzy than before. The girl cried out, clinging to what little sanity she had left. Her small hands sought his marble chest, running over swollen nipples. A growl of encouragement escaped him, and soon her pink tongue flicked out to repeat the motion.

He reared back, his hair cascading to send little tremors through the angel beneath him. His hips rocked forward hard, jarring her against the floor until his name spilled from her lips like a mantra. The room seemed too echo with them, humming in approval and driving their stamina to new levels.

All too soon the pleasure washed over them, driving them both over the top to spill in lazy languid circles back down to earth.

A sweet panting filled the night air, calming the flames of the heat raging within. Young, shy hands sought the male above her, seeking sanctuary from the cold threatening to overwhelm her again. Liquid laughter broke the spell, and the female pulled back. Worry shone in clear brown eyes as the creature above her cooed sweetly for her ears alone. "Mine." He whispered, laughing again when she flinched away. His hips pushed down, reminding that they were still deeply locked together.

Tears gathering in luminescent eyes, threatening to drown them both in her sorrow. A frown pulled at skin so pale, and lips sought hers. "Do not cry, little one." He murmured softly.

Tears hot enough to scald become the cool breeze of delight.

Arms reached forward with serpentine grace and held her lover close to her heart. A low chuckle echoed and sweet undulations had her reeling again. "Please." She begged.

Her need became his as they rocked together, drawing saccharine gods down from empyrean clouds to watch the dance of eternity sneak back into existence. Delicious mewls of wanton need drove him to a greater thirst for her supple youth. A nip at her neck and she turned her head, exposing the desire that threatened to claim him.

Teeth sank into tender flesh, pushing aside the layers if skin to find the blood below the surface. A cry of syrupy bliss poured into him as thrusts of infinite power from the girl below drew him into ambrosia.

The girl milked him dry and then some, seeking her own small piece of heaven. His thrusts renewed, even as yet unwilling to end this dance of exquisiteness. Malleable fingers ran over unyielding flesh, driving the muscles to loosen. A deep growl echoed through her blood and strong fangs pulled free of lymphatic flesh.

A moan of pain filled the night. Apologetic licks eased the pain and soothed the frayed nerves of the compliant female. "Sesshoumaru?" She whispered, awaiting the reply she was sure would bring elation.

The swift rush of skin on skin sent the seraph soaring into heaven. Arms wrapped around and held onto the body of the creature above her. A slow smile graced bloody lips while hair as bright as the sun crossed the heaving bosom of the goddess who returned to join him.

A sweet caress of lips on heated flesh brought brown eyes back to amber. "My angel." He murmured, capturing boiled flesh between sharp teeth. "My pet." A fevered tongue played over her curves. "My toy." Sharp fangs nipped at delicate flash. "Mine." The whisper sent a shiver of aching fear down into the pit of her stomach.

"My Kagome." He whispered, catching her lips in a dominating kiss, pulling back only when she submitted to his control. "Aishiteru."

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Can anyone tell me if I spelled that last word right? Just want to know.

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