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Dark Past, Ignorant Present, Painful Future? by LotisFlower

The Intruder

A.N.~ Hey I'm new so I'm hoping not to bore you to tears or worse.^_^; So bare with me.

Disclaimer~ Nope not mine, sorry. But Kiara is my own character so hands off!!! ^_^

"..." <–Talking

'...' <–Mind talking

Italics <– Thinking

Chapter 1~ The Intruder

{ Sengoku Jidia }

"KAGOME!!! KAGOME!!! Oi, wench where do you think your going!" yelled Inuyasha.

"Inuyasha" The hanyou's ears immediately flattened against his head, awaiting the pain that was sure to come. And in no time flat the word "sit" could be heard from miles away followed by the sound of a body hitting earth.

"Stupid Bitch! What was that for?!!!" screeched Inuyasha.

"I'm going home Inuyasha, and I'm not coming back until 2 days have past, got it 2 DAYS!" That said Kagome pivoted on her heels and stomped off towards the well, that would take here to her time to relax.

"No! Your not you stupid wench!" Inuyasha yelled. Kagome froze in place and with out turning around said "Inuyasha"and yelled "SIT! SIT! SIT! And for good measure SIT!!!"

Kagome then turned and addressed Sango. "Sango I'm leaving now, I'll be back in 2 days, k"

"Alright, Kagome we'll wait for you in the village." "Yes Lady Kagome, return soon." Kagome nodded to Sango and Miroku. "Alright"

"Kagoooomeeee!" Kagome turned in time to see a red blur launch itself into her stomach with an oomph. "Shippo" "I don't want you to go Kagome, when your gone muttface is always mean to me!" Shippo pleaded. "I'll tell you what Shippo, you be good and I'll bring you chocolate and if Inuyasha is mean to you then we'll "sit" thump him to oblivion, deal?"

"Deal!!!" Shippo squealed jumping to the ground and waving to Kagome. At this Inuyasha visibly paled."feh."

"Already then, I'm gone, see you all in a couple days, bye." She waved and jumped into the well. Kagome felt the old magic of the well envelope her and transport her to her time in the modern era. 'Finally home, thank god!'

"I thought I was going to have to chain Inuyasha to a tree to be able to come back home." Kagome snickered at the image of Inuyasha chained to a tree. 'Not that it would hold him though. Oh well sitting him to oblivion is the next best thing.'She smiled, which quickly turned to a frown. While deep in thought Kagome failed to notice that she had somehow reached the kitchen table. She stopped a few feet away from the table and picked up a piece of paper.

"What's this?" She asked herself. "That's a note Kagome, and here I thought you where smart, oh well." Kagome froze upon hearing the voice and the low chuckle that followed it. Wait...I know that voice, but how? No it can't be... She clutched the note tider and turned to face the intruder. She gasped "You..?!"

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Well there you have it my very first fic and just to you let you know I have no idea where this story will end. So if you like then good for you and if you don't...then um oh well.

So let me no how I did and if I should continue this story. Constructive criticism is welcome. So go ahead and review. Oh and one more thing the reviews I receive will decide if I continue or if I trash the sucker. Ja Ne!

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