Okay. So I was able to read this one too before my vacation....but another cliff hanger!! Oh my gosh!! I don't know if I have time to read the next one......*crys*
I have to know what happens though!! Ahhhh!!! *freaking out*
You are such a good writer!! Great job....I'd rather stay home then go on vacation!!
Kizune- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I decided to review this chapter(3) alone because I thought it was really interesting. I really enjoyed the way you took a single thing in your plot and managed to weave an entire little mini-story out of it, and it was really Really interesting to boot.
Well, just wanted you to know how much I liked this... Heh, every thought of writing original pieces?
Alanna- Mon 17 Jul 2006
| Just wanted to say how much I love your writing. I don't really go for AU fics very often but you make them work so well!! Also, just to let you know Chapter 5 of Unexpected Allies II is a repost of Chapter 4. I didn't want to miss anything!
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