| Awwww, I hate when you make me cry. Its really good, however: obedient was misspelled, as was receiving (rule of thumb: i before e except after c.) and if you use writhing, please, please, please spell it correctly, that one drives me up the wall and i'm tired of the footprints.
OnlineGirl- Mon 09 Oct 2006
| *breaks down crying* THATS SO SSSSSSAAAAAADDDD WWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...update^_^
OnlineGirl- Mon 09 Oct 2006
| WOW she could reconize his growl...O.o...COOL^_^
Alica- Wed 12 Jul 2006
| I love it! Poor Rin had to die. sad very sad. Please con.
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