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please update it is amazing

I like the fic so far. And good luck with it I hope you continue. Only thing I noticed was: "This Sesshomaru couldn’t have Rin to think about, if he had to fight and kill." The change in voice confused me at first. Overall a good start though ^-^

i think this story has potential its a normal plot but because you have good grammer i like it keep it up cant wait for the next chapter :)