Well now, this is a new experience. It was tastefully done, but a suprise none the less. I enjoyed the story very much. It's nice to just read something and not have to think about it, to just enjoy it just because.

I like your description and Kagome's thoughts about "the twit." My only suggestion would be to use italics or something to make their thoughts stand out more. Love it!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?