i really enjoy your style of writing just enough details not too many i love it

how could you! did u kill Kagome!?

That was a very sweet and painful look into love. I do hope you continue it, if nothing else but to assuage my curiosity on why she is dying and what sesshomaru feels about it.

This story was quite excellent, and i dont know why you degrade your writing. It is truly beautiful. You captured you vision magnificently.

Im not usually one for sad stories, but like i said; this little short story was excellent. ^_^ Good job